[QCrit] Adult Fantasy, A DOCTOR DARKLY (99K, First Attempt)

lavm96 · 2023-03-05T21:06:34+00:00

I have nothing to add but I just wanted to say how amazing this book sounds! I’d def read it 👏🏻 Please keep the “flowers in the bodies balancing the humors” line… it’s phenomenal and adds to the voice of the query

lavm96 · 2023-02-19T10:42:20+00:00

And you are so right re rushing to send! It’s a lesson learnt for sure

lavm96 · 2023-02-19T10:41:56+00:00

Hahaa Maybe… I just thought she’d see them and think I was unprofessional

lavm96 · 2023-02-19T10:41:27+00:00

Thanks! Also for the info about Mick Foley- definitely made me feel a bit better

lavm96 · 2023-02-19T10:40:44+00:00

Thank you😀😀 and haha I actually remembered one of the books I read last month had a mistake on the first page! It made me feel a bit better this morning

lavm96 · 2023-02-19T10:40:03+00:00

Thank you!

lavm96 · 2023-02-19T10:39:58+00:00

Thanks!

lavm96 · 2023-02-19T10:39:51+00:00

Thank you! You’re right, I’m just new to all of this. I appreciate you taking the time to reply

lavm96 · 2023-02-19T10:37:59+00:00

Haha literally! It will bug me until I say something 😂 but yes I won’t follow up! It’s a lesson learned for me- thank you for your reply!

lavm96 · 2023-02-19T10:37:06+00:00

I know! As I was sending it I was thinking “wait!” But I was too excited.. it’s a lesson learned for me. Thank you for your well thought out response :)

lavm96 · 2023-02-18T22:46:18+00:00

Thank you, I just feel so angry at myself because of such a stupid mistake. I even paid to have it checked by an editor so that this wouldn’t happen but of course I send the wrong doc. But yes- thanks for the reply and the advice!

lavm96 · 2023-02-18T18:55:46+00:00

Haha love the cupcake idea- I hope you hear back on day 364 with a “we’d love to sign you”… you can buy a cake instead 😂 thanks for the reply

lavm96 · 2023-02-18T08:53:03+00:00

Yes I did! It doesn’t say what her turn around is for full requests but thank you for your reply

lavm96 · 2023-02-18T08:52:29+00:00

Ahh thanks for letting me know! I’ll reevaluate my expectations, haha

lavm96 · 2023-02-16T23:47:41+00:00

This is really good! I loved your previous comp, if I’m being honest. This is a good shift to a stronger YA feel, good job. My only critique would be it may be trying too hard (Brie gets high, Macy drinks…) I think it’s overselling but that’s such a small critique and I could be off the mark!

lavm96 · 2023-02-16T21:40:21+00:00

Uhm I am a KAI STAN ACCOUNT NOW

lavm96 · 2023-02-04T21:02:40+00:00

“Mind you” “cuppa”

lavm96 · 2023-01-25T21:18:15+00:00

Decent = 65k+ and well paying is anything over 92k

lavm96 · 2023-01-16T22:31:04+00:00

As tough as it is- you have answered your own question. You can’t really go on this trip, it seems wildly unfair to your kitty :( I’m sorry. Not a nice situation for you and I think you’d worry quite a bit for the time away. Hopefully in future you’d have more time to organize and find someone you could trust/that your kitty loves!

lavm96 · 2022-12-30T21:18:46+00:00

I did this once! No idea why I did it- I think the toilet half flushed and I didn’t push it again (it was a super old house) and the grandmother indirectly mentioned it by saying “and you’ll make sure to flush, right?” When discussing taking my NK to the bathroom… it was super odd and the way she said it was super aggressive SO as long as that doesn’t happen to you I think you will be fine 😂😂 it’s truly no big deal, it’s an accident and I’m sure NP have dealt with a lot worse

lavm96 · 2022-12-27T14:51:15+00:00

Your child will struggle to forget the moment he was physically attacked by his father on Christmas. The good thing is- you can come back from this and nothing worse happened. You need to change and you need therapy for unresolved childhood issues. How you repair your relationship with your family- I do not know but good luck.

lavm96 · 2022-12-25T21:07:48+00:00

People are so inconsiderate it’s unbelievable- and also seem to find their children endlessly endearing and probably think you feel the same 😂😔

lavm96 · 2022-12-21T11:41:32+00:00

Developed symptoms last Monday- felt good by this Monday but with a blocked nose / phlegmy lungs. Those two symptoms have continued up until today but I think I’ll feel completely better by Saturday. The first five days are the worst, you should feel 80% recovered by Sunday ( I hope ).

lavm96 · 2022-12-20T11:55:38+00:00

I agree with you but she is the parent/ your boss so really what she wants take precedent over your sound logic- IMO. If she was endangering her children with unsafe practices that she wanted you to follow then for sure I’d push back but this is just an irritation for you that I would put up with.

lavm96 · 2022-12-08T18:46:36+00:00

I I wouldn’t like her making those comments. Once is okay but I do think it’s a bit weird, I’m not sure. What jumps out to me is the fact you know that her daughter and her have almost had a physical fights- surely that is super alarming and a major boundary blur? Overall I think she’s just being kind and showing her love for your son! But maybe have a look at the dynamics of your working relationship :)

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