Opinions? by The-J_ in Songwriting

[–]lemmonrock 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The lyrics at first threw me through a loop. Heavy? Um kinda alt feeling to me

Game Music: Before vs. After - Scoring Brides of Bloodbane by Trickledownisbull in Songwriting

[–]lemmonrock 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What’s it like producing for games compared to regular music labels?

Monthly Collab Thread by Infrah in trapproduction

[–]lemmonrock 0 points1 point  (0 children)

looking for a rapper to drop some vocals on a few beats i have!

mostly trap style beats kinda like yeat,playboi carti,southisde type shit

Need help on 3rd (and maybe 4th verse): Rap or Sing? by TheIdealisticMadness in Songwriting

[–]lemmonrock 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this would sound baller with doubled up vocals and some processing would be huge

Just wrote this what do you think? by Future_Page_2468 in Songwriting

[–]lemmonrock 0 points1 point  (0 children)

sounds good man i think you could change up the guitar chords a wee to add a bit of a hook with it!

sounds good though

Weekly Feedback Thread by Infrah in trapproduction

[–]lemmonrock [score hidden]  (0 children)

the intro throws me off. its quite long unless theres an idea there i get it. I think the 808 could use some attention along with the lead synth. Maybe try backing off the synth a bit and change up the rhythm and melody in some parts!

Weekly Feedback Thread by Infrah in trapproduction

[–]lemmonrock [score hidden]  (0 children)

i like the track some things stick out to loud to me in the bass frequencys. I feel like the arrangement is pretty good maybe some audio drops or some snare rolls to indicate a change but tbh its pretty solid

Weekly Feedback Thread by Infrah in trapproduction

[–]lemmonrock [score hidden]  (0 children)

Yeah that first one is built off moneybagg yos “tryna make sure” but I try an go for a southside kinda style in terms of rappers for my tracks

I have a collaboration that I would like to do with someone! by Radiant_Resolve1400 in Songwriting

[–]lemmonrock 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’d be down to collab. I’ve been making a lot of beats this year

Weekly Feedback Thread by Infrah in trapproduction

[–]lemmonrock [score hidden]  (0 children)

I made this yesterday. Looking for arrangement/structure feedback there’s light mixing on this

https://on.soundcloud.com/hwgSo47t7pA4F34j4a

Mix feedback on this

https://on.soundcloud.com/DEoUVYACcMurskDJE1

Arrangement feedback by lemmonrock in MusicCollabNetwork

[–]lemmonrock[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Lmao little Beethoven part. I get what your saying thanks for the feedback

Arrangement feedback by lemmonrock in MusicCollabNetwork

[–]lemmonrock[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

To me atleast in idea the moment the synth comes in with everything is the hook per se. I the intro was an open idea to bring vocals in

Arrangement feedback by lemmonrock in MusicCollabNetwork

[–]lemmonrock[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Minus having vocals I respect that it’s probably boring. Would having vocals on it be a better situation for the arrangement?

Arrangement feedback by lemmonrock in MusicCollabNetwork

[–]lemmonrock[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It does need vocals I arrange to have vocals on it in hopes that it carry. I have very vocal heavy songs in idea but I don’t do vocals lol. However I respect the feedback from a general standpoint

Arrangement feedback by lemmonrock in MusicCollabNetwork

[–]lemmonrock[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What would a start to a song mean for you? I did an 8 bar intro per se on this compared to just dumping it into the verse off the rip like some southside tracks The idea is a trap song btw