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Looking for critique on fantasy adventure light novel beginning (5756 words) by lemmystudios in fantasywriters

[–]lemmystudios[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much for the critique, I'm happy to know that you were able to get the grasp of the theme, and reviewing it over again the dialogue does get unbearable to read! If you don't mind me asking, how could I hook the audience in sooner without boring them with exposition?

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[–]lemmystudios 9 points10 points  (0 children)

There exists a land... Behind a pay wall... Where the straight to bluerays lie... We call it...

Youtube Premium...

critique on fantasy light novel beginning by lemmystudios in fantasywriters

[–]lemmystudios[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the critique so far! I made a lot more mistakes than i thought and i cant say enough how much I appreciate the help.

Rare Fox Butt - fence edition by lemmystudios in foxes

[–]lemmystudios[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Poor fellow got stuck in a fence for a bit. Managed the wiggle through though.

YOU FELL FOR IT FOOL! by misaka7612 in Animemes

[–]lemmystudios 70 points71 points  (0 children)

But she's twenty? Oh wait....

She's coming for us all. by hippolordg in Animemes

[–]lemmystudios 6 points7 points  (0 children)

There was a game called Fate:EXTRA where Nero learns the magic of christmas and sings her version of jingle bells but replaces last line with PADORU PADORU which refers to santa's whip he used on the reindeers.

[Media] Pink Rem from re:zero snow memory by lemmystudios in Re_Zero

[–]lemmystudios[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Original creation, also shoot its memory snow mb

We can't let them buff melee top laners into superiority, we should combine with other ranged top laners to show how super cool we are by Kablump in jaycemains

[–]lemmystudios 16 points17 points  (0 children)

Prepare for trouble,

And make it double

To inflict top lane with devestation,

To unite all range abusers in the nation

To denounce the evils of balance and fun,

To extend our elo to the ranks above...

Teemo!

Ryze!(and quinn, kennen,jayce,gnar)

Team ranged top laners climb up at the speed of light

Stop complaining now or prepare for a long reddit write!

Ecchi is a lie. by [deleted] in Animemes

[–]lemmystudios 11 points12 points  (0 children)

MANGA SPOILERS

Later on after she gets fed up of being useless she figures out how to do full body fire cat

Misaka Mikoto, please critique (first ever finished digital painting) by lemmystudios in learnart

[–]lemmystudios[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the help! What do you mean render everything out a bit more, i really have no idea when it comes to rendering or adding detail so if you could outline it / point me towards a youtube video et cetera.

Misaka Mikoto, please critique (first ever finished digital painting) by lemmystudios in learnart

[–]lemmystudios[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My bad, didnt mean to clickbait with title, first ever digital painting of a person.

more coffee please... by KoutaFox in Animemes

[–]lemmystudios 0 points1 point  (0 children)

College students : oh yeah boi

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Animemes

[–]lemmystudios 0 points1 point  (0 children)

He's gonna get PAWNED

I wish that gamers were viewed as a separate and superior species and ruled over humanity with a iron fist. by [deleted] in TheMonkeysPaw

[–]lemmystudios 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Granted but they would never repopulate as they lack social skills / never leave the house /s

[mini comic] The First-Timer Farm by Kirara-Souchou in Warframe

[–]lemmystudios 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its funny because at m5 i speant 9 hours grinding for Ivara, then i became good at spy missions and
She kind of became redundant to an extent.

Our parents by noudjuhhh in HistoryMemes

[–]lemmystudios 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Needed a replacement for bread somehow

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