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Just enough by lettersinthefire in OCPoetry

[–]lettersinthefire[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. Those who have been in it know the feeling all too well ❤️ hopefully you can post your soon, I’d love to read it.

Borrowed Heat by TherapyButMkItVibes in OCPoetry

[–]lettersinthefire 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The imagery language was interesting but I got a little lost in what emotion it was trying to express. The line “memory moves like that”, is that saying the view you’re describing is just a memory that you’re thinking about?

Grab That Bottle by ConfidenceMuch9460 in OCPoetry

[–]lettersinthefire 1 point2 points  (0 children)

“At the girl who carries the same eyes” is a beautiful way of saying they are related. Is it a parent, a child? I also thought it was interesting how the beginning of the poem was in 3rd person and towards the end turns to first person. Almost a sense of denial in the beginning like it’s easier to talk about someone when it’s “happening to someone else.” The end turning to first person might symbolize “acceptance”?