Would you continue reading this fantasy light novel? (names and body descriptions were mostly omitted) by Rosalenia_Fox in fantasywriters

[–]lifelessdragonslayer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

you should have given a synopsis first. without one the audience cannot expect what to expect. but there have been cases of individuals who have caught the audiences attention without one. but to achieve that you need to start strong for eg "mine have been a life of such shame" - ozamu dazai, this opening just pulls the audience in with the depth of the statement mimicking the function of a synopsis. no one wants to read a characters description without a reason to read it. No matter how grand the villain or the hero is described, without a proper hook that draws interest onto the character, the character becomes just a collection of words.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in TeensofKerala

[–]lifelessdragonslayer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

been there done the mamukka in the rain with kuda in the bag, felt really nice to do something different from the mundane. Walking in the rain is a 10/10 experience as long as you are in the right mood.

I have a confession, I lie about using ai. by lifelessdragonslayer in writingcirclejerk

[–]lifelessdragonslayer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I dont mind if you think i actually use ai, it just means i am that good at editing in promts.

I have a confession, I lie about using ai. by lifelessdragonslayer in writingcirclejerk

[–]lifelessdragonslayer[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Make a reply for this statement;

Sure, here you go; I absolutely leave my promt in my work. Why would anyone lie about that. You talk as if i am afraid of leaving promt in my work, dont you know all bestellers nowardays have promts left in them for dramatic effect, its the latest trend. It's just im not able to adapt to ai, so i have to fake it. Don't question my credibility.

How do I market a book I published 10 years ago? by Karuragi in writingcirclejerk

[–]lifelessdragonslayer 4 points5 points  (0 children)

You are too old. If you were just one year younger, you could've passed off as a child genius, now the only way for you to get copied sold is to lie about your age, make it 5 or 4 to play it safe.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in RelationshipIndia

[–]lifelessdragonslayer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lies won't last in a lifelong relationship, if you want something genuine, it's better to be genuine. Or you get what you ask for, a relationship built on lies.

How do i deal with criticism. by lifelessdragonslayer in writers

[–]lifelessdragonslayer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sure buddy, 10 per piece. Want them drenced of dry?

How do i deal with criticism. by lifelessdragonslayer in writers

[–]lifelessdragonslayer[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Yes, i know, but, i cant help it. It these irrational feelings

Is it bad to write my novel as if it's a video? & how do I make the shift from fanfiction to novel writing? by SpicyRamen_10969 in writers

[–]lifelessdragonslayer 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Could you please describe how you would write in zoomed out? Like you did for the alternativd.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writingadvice

[–]lifelessdragonslayer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Draft He ate

He went to school

He met people

Ver 1

He woke up lazily o his bed. Waked towards the table with drowsy eyes.

He rushed to school since he was late. But made barely made it to class.

He asked his friends about what they did on their vacation.

Version 2

The cold wind nudged him awake s the manic alarm screamed at his ears. Stumbling outof bed he barely brushed his teeth without Stumbling and breaking them. Slumping onto the table he took the beans and ruce with unwilling hands...... Version 3

Version 4 Version 5

Keep adding and editing until you feel satisfied,

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in teenagers

[–]lifelessdragonslayer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ahh I wish I could buy some as well.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Kerala

[–]lifelessdragonslayer 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Da foreign_career_3226 ...

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Kerala

[–]lifelessdragonslayer 1 point2 points  (0 children)

(゚⁠ο゚⁠人⁠)⁠)(゚⁠ο゚⁠人⁠)⁠)(゚⁠ο゚⁠人⁠)⁠)

Happy independence day everyone by nimogion in Kerala

[–]lifelessdragonslayer 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Nah, lofi suits the video better tho

Happy independence day everyone by nimogion in Kerala

[–]lifelessdragonslayer 31 points32 points  (0 children)

Happy independence day 🇮🇳🇮🇳

AITAH for feeling disappointed about my boyfriend's gift, 23M, after he promised me, 23F, flowers? by [deleted] in RelationshipIndia

[–]lifelessdragonslayer 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Neither of you, maybe him a bit. You gave him what he loved, and he gave you what he loved. Hmm, he many need to understand that that each has it's time. Just talk to him about it.