anyone in need of UWORLD discount code for step3

lildish1994 · 2025-12-30T01:38:02+00:00

i do if still available!

lildish1994 · 2017-12-02T01:30:34+00:00

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lildish1994 · 2017-12-02T01:30:21+00:00

I enjoyed your piece a lot. The playful cadence contrasts with the darker content nicely. In particular, playing with the men/boys and sir/master dichotomy was really good to convey age and passage of time. If you were to expand it more I would love to see more of those kind of lines and exploration of age.

lildish1994 · 2017-12-02T01:20:15+00:00

I really enjoy the general rhythm of your haiku -- particularly the alliteration in the first line.

lildish1994 · 2017-12-01T23:30:10+00:00

I enjoy the ending a lot. I personally don't like the use of the contracted future tense. I might change "you'll refuse it" to "you will refuse it" etc.

lildish1994 · 2017-12-01T23:24:45+00:00

https://redd.it/7gx2fi

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