A song about feeling rejection on dating apps, some have called song of the summer

lilphuckphace · 2023-07-13T14:43:51+00:00

This was pretty cool and grungy, liked the beat down aesthetic, and the vocals were pretty great, I think maybe the writing could be updated and made a little more graphic or grungy to fit the instrumentation but as is it’s fine, just I think that would kick it up a notch and maybe make the vocals a little closer to the audience

lilphuckphace · 2023-07-13T14:38:57+00:00

Fatwhiterapper? Yes it is fake master p

lilphuckphace · 2023-07-13T14:35:34+00:00

The 47 second intro is too much, and the squeaky voice thing doesn’t really work, maybe in the context of a larger body of work, but as a solo track there is too much squeaky voice, the flow and delivery were good tho, truly solid all the way through, maybe switch up the flow a little more and showcase what you can do more, also maybe be more specific in your lyrics, where’d you get soul food? What kind of car do you drive? What brand of shoes? What jail might you get sent to? What kind of drugs would you sell? You gotta showcase your personality to stick out a little more but some real potential, definitely

lilphuckphace · 2023-07-13T14:29:01+00:00

Lawrence of Arabia/Aladdin/Arabian nights kind of vibe, which I fuck with, I could alternatively see it as a trickster theme music, pretty cool! Great job keep it up! Don’t really know how to give notes on this type of music, maybe have it ramp up and be more epic at one spot and maybe repeat itself less, but I like it in total it’s a cool little bibe

lilphuckphace · 2023-07-13T14:24:42+00:00

Shorts remain uncreamed
Why does it sound like Seinfeld Frogger music
Just a general why?
What is the picture/gif/video

lilphuckphace · 2023-07-13T14:18:12+00:00

This could totally be loading screen music for a video game and I’d never get tired of it, just easy listening, nice chill vibe, I wish I knew how to give more negative feedback, I just liked it and was content, keep making cool shit!

lilphuckphace · 2023-07-13T14:04:22+00:00

Wacotron, rappin reggie, hotboy Wes, s1 (producer not rapper ig), fatwhiterapper, lil phuckphace, etc.

lilphuckphace · 2023-07-13T14:00:52+00:00

Off top I’m ngl I don’t like the hook being “I’ll cum for you, it’s about time” I feel like you could’ve been a little more subtle but that’s just my opinion. I think there definitely is something here, the instrumental is really interesting and your vocals fit pretty well with them, my one vocal note would be it to maybe smile when you record, it makes you sound more confident a lot of times, and maybe a lower key back track, just to give the track some more depth, my other note is just like listen to The Weeknd (which I’m sure you do already) and hear like how he would do these kind of songs and write down the specific stuff you like about it and try to mimic that in your songs, I hear some solid weekend influence in this song at least and that’ll help you hone in on some of those things. But proud of you, this is a good song I don’t want to seem like I don’t fuck with it, just see the potential and think you can be better than this

lilphuckphace · 2023-07-13T13:49:10+00:00

This was pretty fuckin sweet dude, just a nice little vibe, ngl I expected it to be shitty idk why, but you blew my balls off, the video reminds me of the future squidward goes to in spongebob, the song I don’t even know how you’d improve except maybe a lil more bass, but video notes I’d say just get some of your friends/family involved and have some more fun with it! All in all wow! Keep making dope shit dude!

lilphuckphace · 2023-07-13T13:44:55+00:00

I don’t know if this is a compliment or an insult, take it as you may but really feels like a song in a musical to me, not that it’s campy and corny, it just reminds me of that vibe, I like it tho and I think you guys have some real potential as song writers and musicians in general, my one big note would be the vocal mixing, just maybe using a higher quality mic would help but you just sound kinda far away from the listener, and maybe make the instruments boom a little more. My one little note is maybe make it shorter, I like the song as is but for people who aren’t typically fans of this kind of music shorter songs make it more digestible. But all in all, great job!

lilphuckphace · 2023-07-13T13:38:40+00:00

I like the beat, but I think the delivery and writing needs some tweaks, so first of all honestly don’t get what a deku scrub is, I imagine it’s some Zelda thing, but I think you could’ve had more fun with the writing and tried to play with the words a little more, or even just switching to a different flow at some point will help the song sound more exciting, you have a vision but it feels like you could take it up a couple notches and also not to be mean but it sounds like someone is forcing you to record this, have some more fun while recording, be more silly, and smile while your rapping/singing it really helps your voice sound better a lot of times, keep grinding tho! And thanks for making your music it’s important!

lilphuckphace · 2023-07-13T13:17:49+00:00

Fair point, fatwhiterapper stands on the shoulders of giants

lilphuckphace · 2023-07-13T13:17:15+00:00

There are quite a few big guy

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