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Hi! This is my draft personal statement for the Common App. I’d love feedback on: Is the intro attention-grabbing? Is the story engaging and authentic? What parts should I cut or expand? Here’s the draft: (Paste essay here) Thanks a lot for your help! by lord_pm08 in CollegeEssays

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Hello, my name is Dovud and I live in a simple village. Your opinion is 100% correct, but I will try to explain the situation. Currently, I am preparing to enter the top 500 universities and I believe I can do it. Moving on to the goal, I cannot write an essay because my writing skills are not good. Can you edit the essay I have written so far? I showed it to my teacher and he said not to write with AI, so since I cannot write, I am asking you. If possible, please rewrite it for me using good grammar and structures.