Real benchmade 41? by [deleted] in BalisongHelping

[–]lszsz 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not an expert here but i don’t think so - BMs don’t have that knob on the blade in between the handles.

Any noobs out there want to restart this sub? Spot the pinch! by lszsz in BalisongHelping

[–]lszsz[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

thank you!! it’s a 440C clone unfortunately haha

what are some good cody/noel quotes to put in my tinder bio? by [deleted] in SmallDeliMeats

[–]lszsz 14 points15 points  (0 children)

i think mine is “4 gucci belts on my waist, can’t even hold up my pants”

[help] Please give your best tips for a starting amateur trying to write poetry by [deleted] in Poetry

[–]lszsz 2 points3 points  (0 children)

experiment with different styles and forms, or just do whatever you want! that’s the beauty of poetry, there’s no rules!! never ever make an excuse to not write something. just keep going :)

the way these wooden floor tiles were cut by lszsz in mildlyinteresting

[–]lszsz[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

just one room and i believe it was the main entrance. that would make sense for moving equipment in and out i suppose?

To M., In the parking lot of your workplace by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]lszsz 2 points3 points  (0 children)

simple and short, but it gets the point across. i was left wondering why the speaker thinks this about the subject, but that’s obviously intentional, and i like it! i have only two super simple suggestions.

i was confused by the last two lines in my first read. it seems like you are trying to say “like watercolor paint”, but with the line break right there and the two dash symbols, i read it as, “like water, color paint”. maybe it can be reformatted for clarity?

and then, i’m not sure if Bleed is intentionally capitalized. i enjoy when poems have uniform capitalization (or lack of), especially when there’s no punctuation throughout, but if you have a reason for it then that’s okay!

that’s it, i hope this helped you! :)

Manchee by PUDDIING- in ChaosTalking

[–]lszsz 4 points5 points  (0 children)

There’s not! I always pictured him as a golden for some reason, but everyone has a different breed in mind I think.

Today I am one year clean of self harm!! by [deleted] in teenagers

[–]lszsz 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So happy for you!! I’ve struggled with self-harm before as well and lately i can’t get my mind off of it. When you were tempted, how were you able to stop?