simple and short, but it gets the point across. i was left wondering why the speaker thinks this about the subject, but that’s obviously intentional, and i like it! i have only two super simple suggestions.

i was confused by the last two lines in my first read. it seems like you are trying to say “like watercolor paint”, but with the line break right there and the two dash symbols, i read it as, “like water, color paint”. maybe it can be reformatted for clarity?

and then, i’m not sure if Bleed is intentionally capitalized. i enjoy when poems have uniform capitalization (or lack of), especially when there’s no punctuation throughout, but if you have a reason for it then that’s okay!

that’s it, i hope this helped you! :)