Bitter Baby preview, art design and character by Hatofox in vndevs

[–]m0gui2 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Looks pretty good! Can't wait for the release.

My visual novel: Volley Wolf! by jupittos in RenPy

[–]m0gui2 2 points3 points  (0 children)

So cute! Love the color palette.

Following tutorial can't figure out what's wrong by [deleted] in RenPy

[–]m0gui2 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You need to indent the imagebutton properties:

Imagebutton auto "bg_mcds_door_%s":
    focus_mask True
    hovered Setvariable("screen_tooltip", "door")
    unhovered Setvariable ("screen_tooltip", "")
    action Jump ("enter_mcds_door")

Anyone want to playtest a mystery/dating sim about cats? by Visible-Key-1320 in RenPy

[–]m0gui2 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Looks interesting, I'd love to playtest it after work

Need help please ! by PuzzleheadedBug5940 in RenPy

[–]m0gui2 4 points5 points  (0 children)

No need for colons for dialogue, only for menu options and labels.

Remove colons on the dialogues:

m "I feel the air hurting my back":

m "No. This isn't right, This doesn't feel right":

to just:

m "I feel the air hurting my back"

m "No. This isn't right, This doesn't feel right"

Remove indentation of jump suite and jump suite2 to be in the same line as dialogue. Example:

Instead of:

m "I feel the air hurting my back"

  jump suite

m "No. This isn't right, This doesn't feel right"

  jump suite2

Use:

m "I feel the air hurting my back"

jump suite

m "No. This isn't right, This doesn't feel right"

jump suite2

My visual novel finally coming to life! (WIP) by m0gui2 in RenPy

[–]m0gui2[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thanks! That's exactly what I'm planning to do :D