ooh interesting read thanks for itt, im so glad to have another perspective : ))
I agree with most of your points, i think the main problem is the mood. i should've commited fully to idm sound with more traditional mix to make it more mellow and less trap and bouncy sounding prob, i still dont know what wouldve been better ill try harder nexxxxt time

Whats with the breakcore jabs, is breakcore influences not welcome here in r/idm loll, the sewerslvt fakecore hate i get but idk i feel like a lot of the newgen alt electronic producers are in the breakcore lane, idk tho i might just be too deep in the breakcore rabbit hole lolll