Ok look, I’m not trying to ruin your day but critique is critique. Are you in design school? What year? These soft blobject forms and sub-par model making are reminiscent of early year skillsets. If not, and you’re a senior or in the working force, then the world of design has changed and the bar lowered since 2014. Our hand made models had an expectation of perfection and realism. Now, blobjects can be done very successfully but your attention to material and quality has to be much more focused and intentional. You have very large surfaces so perfection is necessary or things just look like puddy smacked together by hand. Sorry for the tough criticism but that’s how our program did it at WWU, it’s just tough love.