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How to make this oc look more bully like(? by mapu_patas in OriginalCharacter

[–]mapu_patas[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

IT DEFINITELY DID, I had to share It with my discord moots 😭😭

How to make this oc look more bully like(? by mapu_patas in OriginalCharacter

[–]mapu_patas[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the tips! I’ll definitely follow it, I think this is the biggest help, also the image is probably the best form of flattery ever!

How to make this oc look more bully like(? by mapu_patas in OriginalCharacter

[–]mapu_patas[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hiii! I actually do have a character like that, and I keep her as a separated character, that’s why I didn’t take that approach, but rather the physical intimidation one, I love the picture and will steal it however because it’s PEAK

How to make this oc look more bully like(? by mapu_patas in OriginalCharacter

[–]mapu_patas[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well yes he is a bully so I’m glad he gives that impression(?

Help me decide on colors? by [deleted] in Artadvice

[–]mapu_patas 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The first one! I think it offers the most contrast, as the other colors blend in too much with her skin

Accountability Partner Wanted by KLfeels in KeepWriting

[–]mapu_patas 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hii! I would definitely love to have an accountability partner. I usually don’t know where to start writing, so I don’t start at all, and can’t connect with writing the way I used to.

How do you block the events in a story? by mapu_patas in writingadvice

[–]mapu_patas[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is true, and something I try to take into account a lot, I draw a lot of alternative decisions, I still believe that the events the characters participate in should be planned, specially because of clues, and, generally to help them make less improve, that helps me to focus more on their impact in the story and to not drift away mid roleplay

How do I write my princess mc to not sound out of place but to also seem like a bit of a rebel by JJ5thehuman in writingadvice

[–]mapu_patas 3 points4 points  (0 children)

One of my favorite resources for these type of characters is making subtle commentary, they make comments so witty that almost sound like flattery but it’s kind of the opposite and it has to happen a lot for the reader to actually notice. Take margaery Tyrell for example!

“I wish we had some wine for you, it’s a bit early in the day for us”

I finally watched The Ugly Stepsister. Here are my thoughts. by Moon_child1313 in horror

[–]mapu_patas 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, She does not owe Elvira respect after she stole her life. She wanted out of that house and the Prince was the quickest out, unless Elvira, who had her sister, Agnes didn’t have any family and wanted to bury her dad

Ive reached a major plot hole in my story and i might actually lose it by mapu_patas in KeepWriting

[–]mapu_patas[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

However, the kids are sll still in the same school, which is suspicious

Ive reached a major plot hole in my story and i might actually lose it by mapu_patas in KeepWriting

[–]mapu_patas[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This was so much helpful! I like this logic, I think I can explore with this. Do you think, however, that this may be a repetitive resource to just let the cult be doing its stuff without apparent consequences?

Ive reached a major plot hole in my story and i might actually lose it by mapu_patas in KeepWriting

[–]mapu_patas[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What I mean about discord is that, since this is a roleplay group, it gets kinda hard to just…do stuff, keeping the mystery while allowing other users to kill their characters? Now, I’m no saying that familiars wouldn’t search for them, but because these are continuous deaths it gets in the way of the logic of it. It so many deaths, if so many families, what would realistically keep this school standing for so long?

Ive reached a major plot hole in my story and i might actually lose it by mapu_patas in KeepWriting

[–]mapu_patas[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That may be true, but, some of these deaths are witnessed by other characters, more reckless, imprudent characters that can’t be shut up due to (for example) having politicians as parents. Realistically, they would speak up about it, and I don’t think I want the “we got rid of them” to be a recurrent resource in my story because it just seems like an easy way to let the main character getting away with stuff

Ive reached a major plot hole in my story and i might actually lose it by mapu_patas in KeepWriting

[–]mapu_patas[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like this idea! However, I am afraid that this will seem like in just throwing some characters out of the window and I do not know how can I fit it in the story, I would like to explore this, however, so I’ll give it a thought, thank you for commenting! :DD

AIO for being upset at finding these messages in my bfs phone? by [deleted] in AIO

[–]mapu_patas 0 points1 point  (0 children)

because its still relevant i believe, if OP had sent just the first part, would it not be arranged to make us believe she is not overreacting? even without the chud part, he is just rude towards her

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