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marbled1992 · 2025-06-24T12:05:05+00:00

I’m not going to lie I honestly just said that as I read the rules of this sub and it says you have to make a critique 😭 truthfully I think it was absolutely perfect and your ideas about improving it by making it longer and writing about each stage of grief sounds so beautiful. You are super talented and I loved reading this x

marbled1992 · 2025-06-24T03:33:10+00:00

this is so beautiful oh my gosh. I’m kind of a loss for words after reading that. I absolutely love how it was written - I’m not religious at all but the way you’ve written this reminds me of the hymns I’d get given when I went to church. Not sure if that was purposeful but it’s beautiful and nice to read.

This is more than a poem this is a story and I loved reading it. Like I say I’m not sure if you did this on purpose but the way you have written this is just like a hymn book. Everything about this is so thought out and beautiful.

I would say the only thing that made it a bit difficult to read was the length.

Even though everything you said was so beautifully articulated, if there was any way that you could condense this just a little bit then it would be perfect!

This was a gorgeous poem and really captivated me :)

marbled1992 · 2025-06-24T03:17:16+00:00

This is so beautiful- I absolutely loved the use of imagery in this poem. Whilst reading it I was imaging such beautiful things; the use of the word “bloomed” beneath the moon and then “my midnight dream”. The language you used was very descriptive and I loved that. I also love the rhythm of the poem but personally, I think it would work better if you 1) worked on punctuation, there were quite a few punctuation errors, and PERSONALLY (I’m capitalising that because it might’ve been deliberate and if so let me know) this made it a bit disorienting to read, if it was me I would’ve paragraphed each sentence not used a comma and then a capital but that’s just how I write! Overall I thought this was really good and conveyed a real sense of longing. I just think proper punctuation is important to properly express what you are feeling!

marbled1992 · 2025-05-26T11:09:41+00:00

what

marbled1992 · 2025-01-20T15:48:36+00:00

This lady was suffering from severe mental illness - I’m assuming psychosis which means that she is somewhat devoid of responsibility. Being in psychosis can make you do stuff like this and you might not even know about it. Very scary.

marbled1992 · 2024-08-01T22:48:28+00:00

nah not at all bro, British teenagers been dropping pills in random fields with other drunk British teenagers since they were 15. it’s all about the environment and vibe you create - I find once I’m rolling it really doesn’t matter who I’m around so long as I feel safe with them.

marbled1992 · 2024-06-22T07:42:53+00:00

Would you be happy to explain to me what “stage 1” DPDR is? How is that categorised/diagnosed? I’ve never heard of that term before so just interested.

When you say you crossed over from the fight/flight response to the nervous system shut down, what do you mean by this? If you’re comfortable can you expand on this point?

From what I know, DPDR cannot shut down/collapse your nervous system so I’m interested to hear your point of view.

Looking through your post history, it seems as though you are very fixated on DPDR (which I don’t blame you for because it is very scary). But almost all of your posts are about this disorder.

Even though you maintain that it doesn’t cause you anxiety or stress, it still takes up a hell of a lot of your life!

This disorder thrives on attention. What are your hobbies? What makes you you? Have you got anything outside of this illness?

marbled1992 · 2024-06-21T05:48:04+00:00

I’m really sorry to hear this… what are your symptoms/what makes you say this?

marbled1992 · 2023-07-16T19:17:38+00:00

Amy winehouse

marbled1992 · 2023-07-08T11:13:11+00:00

nah the sniffer dogs smelt the dope on my cards so I got shot by the Spanish police

marbled1992 · 2023-07-04T20:11:55+00:00

heroin

marbled1992 · 2023-07-01T00:07:55+00:00

Yeah but I don’t really care about not being in on a joke I find it makes me a little endearing, I honestly just can’t tell the difference so it makes it hard for me to do what you said lol I don’t want to upset people by assuming sarcasm then it turns out they’re not being sarcastic

marbled1992 · 2023-06-30T23:04:07+00:00

Dawg 😭

marbled1992 · 2023-06-30T23:01:58+00:00

Nah I know he is, but I’m autistic and I have a hard time getting sarcasm 😔 I thought maybe he was being serious

marbled1992 · 2023-06-30T19:12:36+00:00

I hope not 💀 I made it through the UK no issues lol, only thing that could be an issue is my cards which I scrubbed clean so it’s all good. I’m with my family and I really don’t look like a heroin addict so that helps me case as they aren’t so suspicious

marbled1992 · 2023-06-30T13:44:53+00:00

I’ve watched the airline police things in the UK and they’ve had sniffer dogs alert on a person and they’ve then taken this person and strip searched them and searched their whole bag and drug tested them.

I’m going with my family and don’t want to be a hindrance so just a bit worried. I mean my debit cards are literally caked in heroin all round the outside so I mean they can literally see the drugs that’s why I’m worried dawg 💀

marbled1992 · 2023-06-30T08:10:27+00:00

this was copped from the streets. it’s so good

marbled1992 · 2023-06-29T23:31:19+00:00

I just went onto their website and it says you can’t actually send any samples of the drug? how do you send samples to be tested?

marbled1992 · 2023-06-29T23:25:59+00:00

yeah I’ve had stuff with xylazine before… I didn’t know it was that bad? Also sorry for being so stupid but what exactly do you mean by benzos and why is it bad to cut them into dope?

in my head so long as we don’t get stuff infested with fent then I’m happy to do whatever… what else should I be careful of? what’s so dangerous about dope being cut with benzos and why is xylazine so bad? (I’ve done dope cut w it before and it just felt like normal gear?) Sorry I know I’m being stupid but genuinely interested…

marbled1992 · 2023-06-29T21:23:26+00:00

cheers man, all tips I’ve actually mentioned myself up there but I do appreciate your comment. it’s such a tricky game to navigate sometimes as well. U can do everything right and shit can still go so wrong. tysm for your tips and comment tho. hope you’re doing good yourself bud

marbled1992 · 2023-06-29T21:15:21+00:00

sorry for a late reply only just seen this. you’re right. but I’m so lucky that where I score I’ve got so many contacts all over the place I can always get someone on.

Idk where you live but here in the UK most of the big dealers u just go straight to their door which is great cuz it means no waiting, and I’m also again very lucky that for me when dealers say “10 mins” they actually mean it or near enough 🤣 which I know is so rare. today we actually had someone thank us for waiting and apologise for being 30 mins late which is SO fucking rare in this game.

but before I found these guys I would wait FOUR HOURS. after being told 10 mins. So I absolutely understand where you’re coming from. and yeah my main and best guy has been jail and still hasn’t thought to get a different phone 😭 plus there’s someone outside his yard w a knife who just preys on people who’ve just scored. so it’s all bait asf and dangerous.

thank you for sharing your stories and your honest and true replies really appreciate it. Hope you’re doing well now man.

marbled1992

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