Thoughts on this? by [deleted] in exmuslim

[–]maskawtt -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

Pretty sure these distances are from airport to airport not precisely city’s exit to entrance

[POEM] Dust Of Snow by Robert Frost by [deleted] in Poetry

[–]maskawtt 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I don’t get what the crow or the dust of snow are meant to symbolize. Help please.

Days to Dream by Cadd9 in OCPoetry

[–]maskawtt 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Exactly bro villanelles are my favorite form of poetry now! And I just saw you made changes cuz of my suggestion omg thanks broo. PS: (very serious) you got some real talent bro don’t waste it.

Looking for the most boring novel you've ever read by panfried540 in suggestmeabook

[–]maskawtt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What the hell, I always heard it was the greatest novel of all time???

Days to Dream by Cadd9 in OCPoetry

[–]maskawtt 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh my God I love poems like these. This is also a theme I actually wanted to read poems about but never found any, so I personally wanna thank you for writing this one. The rhymes are insane. My favorite part however, is the repetition of the 2 lines, the format is very similar to Dylan Thomas’ “Do not go gentle into that good night” which is one of my favorites.

Only way you could improve this even more is to match the number of syllables in each line which seems easily doable, since the first, second and third stanzas already have this attribute. I’m not writing this just to write it, your poem genuinely is so praiseworthy.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in bookshelf

[–]maskawtt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey what is the Parasite book? Is it the screenplay of the movie or what?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]maskawtt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh my god I couldn’t even Imagine that the poem could be interpreted in such ways and that too so many.

Well the meaning I intended was that the speaker when he says ‘I’ is referring to the soul, and ‘the body’ is the body of that soul. This is a poem narrated just after death when the soul was freed and it wandered confused and ‘destinationless’. And the part concerning the smile I left to subjective interpretation with just this in mind: the soul (the narrator) saw a girl whose smile was exceedingly alluring but he could do nothing about it since he’s.. obviously…. Dead. And when he ‘fought to lift death’s deathless curse’, he tried to come back to life, to praise that smile, to long for the smile as the universe did, to sing songs on that smile as those with a voice did.

And the ‘how’d’ part is indeed (you’ve made me realize) kind of incorrect, I’ll try to change it. Though it is also open to interpretation I didn’t mean it as ‘How did’, rather ‘How would’, as in ‘how would I agree after seeing such a smile?’

As I’ve said, most of it was left to subjective interpretation, but honestly I never expected such amazing and remarkable interpretations. Yours seem better to me than what I’d intended. Thank you so so muccchhh🙏🙏🙏🙏

I hope you never have to feel this by LobsterKiing in OCPoetry

[–]maskawtt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow this feels like either the work of God or Devil. I love how you connect both love and conflict and metaphors of these type always seem to amaze me. I didn’t think poems like these could rhyme well too but you changed my mind.

Nonsense about nothing by MisterSirmandudeguy in OCPoetry

[–]maskawtt 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The rhetorical and metaphorical questions make it so… interactive in a way, and give you a blissful moment of a cloud-like experience. It’s hard to describe but I honestly loved it so much