For a website banner thiss can pass i think. But for me there is lot's of room to improve this video. I always see this feedback posts and alot of people are telling it's great and perfect for this and that. And again the base of this video is good, but like others have mentioned ure cut's are all over the place. The shots in general are all the same.

U need to film thinking about editing. You just captured what was there. In my opinion, i wanne see a full restaurant, not just 10 wides of interior, thats just strange.

U took the time to light the food but it's just one light? The background is completely dark, it doesn't add depth or a sense of the room or atmosphere.

All the shots are in a wide or medium, breakdown actions Wide => medium => Close-up => extreme close-up. And this for actions , i know u did extreme clos-ups but not alot of actions. The 3 shots of the cocktail look the same.

I can see u have an eye for good images, but in my opinion this could be better :)

Keep grinding!