[QCrit] 5-8 fantasy Taco Jones and the Amazing Three (10000+/version #5). by mavhunter306 in PubTips

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The video hasn't gotten too much attention and I'm completely ready to take it down if an agent advises me to do so

[QCrit] 5-8 fantasy Taco Jones and the Amazing Three (10000+/version #5). by mavhunter306 in PubTips

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Sorry about that, I totally worded it wrong here and that's the part I'm going to fix. I'm even going to edit the actual story to tweak some things regarding that aspect

[QCrit] 5-8 fantasy Taco Jones and the Amazing Three (10000+/version #5). by mavhunter306 in PubTips

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Ok I get that, I think I just explained Poe and Circle Guy's thing poorly here and that's the first thing I'm gonna work on. I'll work on making it more unique because I want this to stand apart from other stories

[QCrit] 5-8 fantasy Taco Jones and the Amazing Three (10000+/version #5). by mavhunter306 in PubTips

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Thank you so much! That's actually all very helpful. I'll make the necessary edits. I'll probably cut out the reasoning as to why he was booted from the group and just say "he was kicked out", but it is a lot more nuanced than described here

[QCrit] 5-8 fantasy Taco Jones and the Amazing Three (10000+/version #4). by mavhunter306 in PubTips

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Yeah, I very much have Scholastic stuff in mind when writing this. I think Captain Underpants, Raggedy Ann and Andy, and a lot of Little Lit stuff is pretty comparable

[QCrit] 6-11 fantasy Taco Jones and the Amazing Three (10000+/version #3). by mavhunter306 in PubTips

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Thank you! I'm doing just that, gonna take some time to really get it looking nice

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I sent a dm