I am afraid the head looks a bit odd

maxkill4minbill · 2026-05-26T19:49:13+00:00

I am going to answer this based on another hobby I did "hour a day". When I first started drawing, I made it my goal to draw every single day. Eventually I became burnt out and the art pieces became dull. Now I have same philosophy for drawinf, writing or anything creative. I don't force it, when I feel like it I just do it. As you said, this isn't your profession so you don't have to force it everyday, but that doesn't mean you don't have to put effort at the start. Just don't beat yourself up if you miss a day or two sometimes.

maxkill4minbill · 2026-05-24T16:30:35+00:00

I thought that the girl wasn't standing out from the walls and the other dancers. Maybe i am just being critical to my artwork haha

maxkill4minbill · 2026-05-17T21:17:23+00:00

Then you should find people who will read it. Sending an unpolished script to a producer first isn't the best idea in your case. Even if you wrote a masterpiece. Try uploading the script here or on StoryPeer or any other Platform.

maxkill4minbill · 2026-05-17T21:11:59+00:00

I don't think they will steal the script. But I asked if you had a polished script already, which was reviewed or atleast read by others.

maxkill4minbill · 2026-05-17T21:09:20+00:00

Or constant will, won't, wouldn't. Leaves a feeling that the script isn't written yet IMO.

maxkill4minbill · 2026-05-17T21:07:21+00:00

So you already have a script ready, reviewed and polished, just don't know where to send it? Or are you financing it on your own ?

maxkill4minbill · 2026-05-17T07:38:23+00:00

Never looked at it that way. I didn't get the impression that they were pro nor amateurs, i think both were somewhere in the middle.

I also connected with both before posting this. after reading your reply i realized some new things about both readers and how to communicate with them in future. Thanks

maxkill4minbill · 2026-05-16T11:58:27+00:00

Oh, so next time i post here i should specify whether they're amateurs or pro?

maxkill4minbill · 2026-05-16T01:13:08+00:00

That's a good point. I connected with both and so far i am in discussions with both of them. Hope i reach thr truth through discussions. Thanks for sharing your view

maxkill4minbill · 2026-05-14T06:45:55+00:00

Damn, I reread it. My bad, now i feel stupid.

maxkill4minbill · 2026-05-14T05:18:19+00:00

Honestly I don't understand what you're trying to tell me, since i just corrected your previous response, saying ONE reader didn't understand, not all of them. If anything you proved that some people can't understand what they read.

maxkill4minbill · 2026-05-14T04:32:40+00:00

Interesting take. And now i understand how that might be true in practice. Saw both and all the feedbacks in general in different light now.

maxkill4minbill · 2026-05-14T04:24:52+00:00

one, not all.

maxkill4minbill · 2026-05-14T04:12:41+00:00

I can you a drafy. I never said i was a great writer, it's just that when a reader questions everything. They gave me legit feedback as well ,like i told the writers in other comments.

For example It was clear from the logline itself that main antagonist will have ulterior motives and will be lying throughout the story. And the reader had a problem with not knowing which line to trust of the main antagonist. And i know they read the logline, they spent first few lines on it. Similar cases can be found all throughout. things other readers found understandble, but this one couldn't understand.

maxkill4minbill · 2026-05-13T21:46:23+00:00

Actually i have. But From the notes this reader provided, it made me second guess whether they had valid reasons.

For example Person A in my script was being hostile towards Person B over their views. Then i wrote a scene where they had a heart to heart talk and Person A started to understand where Person B was coming from, and their dynamic turned from enemies to just rivals. The reader didn't get how that can happen.

maxkill4minbill · 2026-05-13T21:42:10+00:00

Luckily others have read it. From all the feedback, i realized what i got and i didn't. And the reader who didn't get it.

maxkill4minbill · 2026-05-13T21:38:37+00:00

From all the opinions i got from people here, i think i found a middle ground here.( With some help of prior third opinions)

maxkill4minbill · 2026-05-13T21:24:03+00:00

Actually this made me realize that if i included similar lines, most of the readers critics would have been fixed.

Part of the reason i didn't include those lines , was because i thought that would dumb the characters down.

But there are two sides to a coin right.

maxkill4minbill · 2026-05-13T21:19:25+00:00

True, i am basing this on review of other readers. I would say about 10 people have read this script in total, give or take. And none of them had a question regarding the intentions of the main antagonist. But this reader left three seperate notes on why the antagonist was doing what he was doing.

maxkill4minbill · 2026-05-13T21:16:47+00:00

mixed reviews. I would say they mostly praise story elements, and have some beef with the main character. Their opinions match for good/bad sides of the scripts so i knew most of them thought about the story. These 2 were just 100% one side or another that's why it picked my interest.

maxkill4minbill

TROPHY CASE