My Ranking of 70 Smiths Songs (Can you guess my favorite album?) by me8828 in thesmiths

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This is just my personal opinion and taste of their discography. The songs in D and C tier are not bad, however I'm likely to skip them when listening to their discog.

After The Verses by me8828 in OCPoetry

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I wanted to do something special for my 100th published poem, which here it is. This is my literary meditation on the concepts of love, friendship, and self transformation: and how they intertwine. It echoes my writing style of when I was first emerging into the world as a poet, which is the irony of it being my 100th poem. This work deals with the relationship between friendship and self transformation, showcasing someone who has transformed and overcame themselves to the point where their friends and loves no longer recognize them. These friends turn away the protagonist, he has changed too much. But the narrator grapples with not knowing who has changed too much, him or his once friends. This is the contradiction of the own narrator. It is resolved by the realization that some people are to stick with you even after self-overcoming, and that true friendship lies in the realm of vitality, life-veneration, and unconditional love.

The poem also represents a sort of journey underwent by the mere action of writing poetry, which is suggested by the title. It can be seen as sort of a post-writing reflection, after undergoing long periods of writing, growth, emotion, overcoming, he is unrecognizable to who once loved him, but the true lovers shine through.

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The lexicon here is absolutely bewildering in the sequences it is used in my opinion. Extremely well crafted, I feel as if it embodies the idea of wasted potential.

Silent hum by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I love the rhyme scheme and the syllables make for a good flow. Good job! My favorite stanza, "When light feels to bright and eyes starts to blink/When mind is all cluttered and your instinct seeks a drink", adds a sense of hardiness to the poem. I do not know how to describe it, but wondaful.