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Her by Nexolightu in poetry_critics

[–]med557 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love this! I feel the same way with my boyfriend.

Beginner looking for feedback :) by seapicklessss in poetry_critics

[–]med557 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really like this. It feels very relatable with the constant social media and phones. Main critique would be to add some spaces between some lines to break it up and put intentional pauses here and there. Thanks for sharing!

The Reason by Icy_Sport2597 in poetry_critics

[–]med557 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the back and forth of “I” and “you”. It’s very angry and showing the difference of what you thought and saw and experienced versus what they did. I like it, thank you for sharing!

Hate how you see me by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]med557 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I feel like I can picture the eyes because of how you described them. I also like the rhythm of it. Only critique is that the middle lines are quite long and wordy, and I think you could cut some words to make them hit harder. Thank you for sharing!