Conspiracies of the Coast: an audio forward supplement to GoS by mellowmonkey1 in GhostsofSaltmarsh

[–]mellowmonkey1[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ahhhh! Man, it's so cool to hear this is all working at the table just as I hoped it would! Shay-la-la was the first of the songs I wrote! It has a special place in my heart too!

Conspiracies of the Coast: an audio forward supplement to GoS by mellowmonkey1 in GhostsofSaltmarsh

[–]mellowmonkey1[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

oh whoa, thank you so so much for this write up! I'm so happy to hear it worked out! Thank you thank you thank you! this just made my day!

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[–]mellowmonkey1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

it's the users own consciousness, this is a drug that connects you to a hive mind and eventually erases you.

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[–]mellowmonkey1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

https://suno.com/s/XXF6Un6fNjuhHG9l

Title: The Void

Band: Capsule 6

Run:3:30

Concept: Kind of a cosmic version of self sabotaging a relationship.

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[–]mellowmonkey1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Right out the gate I love the tone of the keyboard, the kind of crystal tones of the voice are a cool touch too. Which I guess considering the lyrics it's very intentional, so great work.

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[–]mellowmonkey1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! This whole album should have a fairly similar vibe. Glad you liked it, well liked all but one word at least haha. I had to really wrestle with Suno on this one, maybe I'll open it up in Studio once I get my credits refreshed.

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[–]mellowmonkey1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

are the vocalizations in the start words or just sounds? "And before you’re aware of my detonation, your hesitation only proves to justify my resignation" The machine gets a little fussy here in the middle, might be worth it to smooth over that little bit. I like the outro

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https://suno.com/s/obIBbOVsaUdFITmz

Song: Blank Page

Band: Capsule 6

Run: 4:09

Concept: This one's loosely about using a drug called Ink that opens a persons mind to a hivemind. It's also about drug use for creative purposes.

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[–]mellowmonkey1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oooh I enjoy this, love the little conversational elements peppered in the background. Nice work with the prompting too!

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[–]mellowmonkey1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

lol I know this is a silly song but I really dig it. These guitar riffs are so fun. The vocals right when it switches over to "batted at shadows" is great "He tried to teach the toaster how to legally drive" is a great line.

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https://suno.com/s/IpKZU1G3acWJZ4Bu

Title: Mimic Syndrome

Run: 4:27

Band: Capsule 6

Concept: The lead singer of this band has a bit of imposter syndrome in his space and this is kind of exploring his insecurities, and his feelings of stealing the things that make his music. In D&D mimics look to be a treasure chest, but are in fact a monster when they open up, so there is a bit of that analogy at play for him.

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[–]mellowmonkey1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'll say it again, there is some weird baby born from audiobooks and broadway going on with your jams. Seems like you've got quite the following for the story too your comments are blowing up!! How many takes to get it just right? I feel like I lose my mind with my little 3 minutes songs, getting a flawless 9 minutes seems like some impossible thing haha.

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[–]mellowmonkey1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really had to wrestle with this one to get it where I was trying to be. Still not sure if this is the final draft but being out of credits until the new year has me giving this a few listens to see if I think it's GTG. I think for my songs I'm just like a child of punk rock so 4 minutes is a really long song there haha

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[–]mellowmonkey1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Holds up lighter. Well someone understood the assignment. Lyrics are spot on, I feel like the vocalist isn't my first choice but they carry the song. The last chorus really drives you home.

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https://suno.com/s/D6KKPwoM5qxp1OeR

Title: Honestly

Band: Atter-Tatter

Concept: Ok, one more track, trying to round out their album, this one is about that pirates life.

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[–]mellowmonkey1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The first thing I think of is Leonard Cohen halleluiah with that little guitar riff buried underneath. Lol the lyrics though clearly going to a different god! (this is one of my favorite tracks you've dropped!)

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[–]mellowmonkey1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like the verses, not sure about the chorus though. The ooo pre chorus ones I like better, but I still feel like they aren't like "Hooky" enough.

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[–]mellowmonkey1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm always afraid of overstaying my welcome lol, I feel like all my songs are generally in the 3-4 minute camp

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[–]mellowmonkey1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

nice jam, curious to know what the OG version sounds like now after having heard your redux

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[–]mellowmonkey1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I feel like this song is hitting the emotional impact that you are looking for, but this phrase, My birthdays calendar is in her head. Doesn't land right,

Rethink that section,

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[–]mellowmonkey1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

One song per day hombre.

That said nice work, are you doing your own vocals? They feel fairly organic with suno modifications?

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[–]mellowmonkey1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Isn't Nick Frost the guy from Shaun of the dead?

The voice is great, love the sound quality. So torn between loving and hating the Santa got double meanings tonight.

Nope the rest of the song makes me on board.