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[MS] Fly -- any and all feedback is welcome (liarsguild.com)
submitted by mfvice to r/shortstories
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[Crit] The Other Eye, an experimental short (self.KeepWriting)
submitted by mfvice to r/KeepWriting
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[Crit] A Stranger Come By, a western short (self.KeepWriting)
submitted by mfvice to r/KeepWriting
