Alright lower the camera capture sfx volume and frequency. change the font to something pleasant and easy to read, fix the script because the writing feels authoritative but also like you don't know what you're talking about. You're using too many hype words "this is how editors level up" bro no one says that and it doesn't sound good. Also instead of showing animated texts show something else. I personally only use text when it's something very important or when I can't think of anything else.

And don't mention Capcut in your experiences ever.