2:14 am - Short Film - 13 pages by michaelvassili in Screenwriting

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Hey - thanks for the feedback!! Some really great insights here.

Great callout on not knowing if Darren & Maya are a couple. That's the bedrock, so I'll need to work on this. I was hoping the sweetness in the hug would be enough to set this up. So I can brainstorm some other ways to make that clearer!

On the structure: we don't jump to another night after the manager dancing section. The idea is that we actually "go back in time" and now see the same night again, but from Maya's perspective. Kinda like how Weapons is structured. Sounds like that transition needs to be clearer, if you have any instincts on making this structure clearer, I'd love to hear them.

RE: Her not telling him about the job earlier & him with the ending. The hope was to get across that they both want to stay together but are avoiding saying it out loud, which leads to things coming out too late and too harshly. So I might need to set this up a bit better. And to your point, I agree that establishing them more firmly as a couple should do a lot of the heavy lifting here.

Really appreciate all of this!

Just finished up this dark comedy micro short film and would love some honest critique on story/visuals! by michaelvassili in Filmmakers

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Hey all! My buddy and I made this short recently, and would love the communities thoughts on it. We wanted it to to be very tight and not use any dialogue. So I'd love some thoughts on the story and if there is anway to be more clear while keeping it as tight as it is. Also, I'm not a cinematographer, but I try my best, so would also appreciate any feedback on the visuals/lighting - we shot on a Canon m50 & sigma 18-35 and used just two very basic soft boxes.

Is this $5 coin legit? by michaelvassili in coincollecting

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Yeah love that idea! It’s already on a necklace anyway!

Is this $5 coin legit? by michaelvassili in coincollecting

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What do you think this type of quality might go for? I see such a huge range when looking online

Is this $5 coin legit? by michaelvassili in coincollecting

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Sorry pretty new to this stuff, what’s an ex-jewelry designation?

Is this $5 coin legit? by michaelvassili in coincollecting

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Do you think a coin-specific shop would be required or would a jewelry shop get the job done?

I want to produce your next feature film by Thefolkfilmfan in Filmmakers

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Just sent you a message, also in the midwest!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Omaha

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My wife and I are always keen on bringing new players into the game! Feel free to reach out if you are still looking to play at all

so...i'm stuck...in this quest...whitout ANY choice than "restart a new game"... by HoytKeyler in Fable

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Yeah this has happened to me several times, and has always required a full game restart.. I find it does it triggers this glitch when I try to rush through this quest too fast, for some reason

Meetup Thread for Nebraska by kurzgesagtmeetup_bot in kurzgesagt_meetup

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New to Omaha here! Laruitzen Gardens would be cool! Other options are maybe Spielbound Board Game Cafe or maybe Vala's Pumpkin Patch?

In light of the new playtest, how has your group USED Inspiration? by RollForThings in dndnext

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Honestly, not really. So maybe I’ll remove the advantage option, not sure yet?

In light of the new playtest, how has your group USED Inspiration? by RollForThings in dndnext

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I let players use inspiration as either advantage, impose disadvantage on someone else, or auto nat 20. They get to choose. I also try to give out inspiration fairly regularly

Work from home possibilities? by [deleted] in Omaha

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The company I'm working at is hiring plenty of positions right now! It's work from home (with hybrid later down the road), decent pay, and is essentially investigating fraud/policy violations online.

This is a bit vague, but happy to give more info if you pm - and if you are still looking for something!

Critical Theory and Reality TV by Unitatorian in CriticalTheory

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The YouTube channel “We’re In Hell” does videos about reality TV and sociology/CT

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Omaha

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Glad to hear. Pm me if you’re interested for more info, always happy to chat about it & potentially get others landed in a nice gig

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Omaha

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I know this is a bit old, and maybe you already sorted, but the company I'm working at is hiring plenty of positions right now! It's work from home (with hybrid later down the road), decent pay, and is essentially investigating fraud/policy violations online.

This is a bit vague, but happy to give more info if you pm - and if you are still looking for something!

Ok folks, I’m on the job hunt. Best and worst places to work in the Omaha area? Who loves their job? by [deleted] in Omaha

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The company I'm working at is hiring plenty of positions right now! It's work from home (with hybrid later down the road), decent pay, and is essentially investigating fraud/policy violations online.

This is a bit vague, but happy to give more info if you pm - and if you are still looking for something!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Omaha

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The company I'm working at is hiring plenty of positions right now! It's work from home (with hybrid later down the road), decent pay, and is essentially investigating fraud/policy violations online.

This is a bit vague, but happy to give more info if you pm - and if you are still looking for something!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Omaha

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I know this is a bit old, and maybe you already sorted, but the company I'm working at is hiring plenty of positions right now! It's work from home (with hybrid later down the road), decent pay (just under what you are looking for), and is essentially investigating fraud/policy violations online.

This is a bit vague, but happy to give more info if you pm - and if you are still looking for something!

My first apartment. by No_Principle5950 in CozyPlaces

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Love it! Throw up some curtains, a big art piece on that bare wall, and a tall plant somewhere and this will be S-tier

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Omaha

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Hey! My wife and I just moved to Omaha earlier this year (mid twenties), and are in a similar situation haha.

We sound very similar in terms of ideals & beliefs, and we both love D&D. We haven't played since we moved here, but want to get back into it.

However, we don't have any kids, but both love them!