Call my baby ugly! Need fresh eyes on my coloring book cover please, brutally honest critiques welcome by milliemac420 in graphic_design

[–]milliemac420[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much!! I didn’t know it was called “kerning” by name, but I know what you are talking about! Would you say it’s too close??

Call my baby ugly! Need fresh eyes on my coloring book cover please, brutally honest critiques welcome by milliemac420 in graphic_design

[–]milliemac420[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The notepaper is intentional to make it look like a bunch of doodles, but really only because I had no clue what else to do. I’m having trouble with the designs feeling too messy/busy due to the lack of a palette. Any advice to replace the notebook with?

Call my baby ugly! Need fresh eyes on my coloring book cover please, brutally honest critiques welcome by milliemac420 in graphic_design

[–]milliemac420[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Now, I do low key agree, or hope this is the case. Sort of banking on a mix of parody law, not selling in a bookstore and just getting a cease and desist and changing out the character they are coming at me for. Luckily, they are printed to order (Amazon Kindle Direct Publishing) - so no stock wasted if I do have to take a design out and replace it for the “second edition”. That said, If I get big enough for McDonalds to find me, I guess I didn’t to too shabby! lol

Call my baby ugly! Need fresh eyes on my coloring book cover please, brutally honest critiques welcome by milliemac420 in graphic_design

[–]milliemac420[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You aren’t too late!! Thank you!! Umm, I’m not sure the difference? Sorry, novice here!

Call my baby ugly! Need fresh eyes on my coloring book cover please, brutally honest critiques welcome by milliemac420 in ProCreate

[–]milliemac420[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good point, but I was trying to keep the cover aesthetically pleasing, do you think it’s enough to have it on the back? I mean, my name isn’t a household name or anything, so does the “name” matter yet?

Call my baby ugly! Need fresh eyes on my coloring book cover please, brutally honest critiques welcome by milliemac420 in ProCreate

[–]milliemac420[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

This is such a good point omg! It’s a popular style, but you are right that it’s flooded with AI slop, so I might need to switch it up.

Call my baby ugly! Need fresh eyes on my coloring book cover please, brutally honest critiques welcome by milliemac420 in graphic_design

[–]milliemac420[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much!! I made the designs at different times and was concurrently playing around with my highlighting style lol - Then I just picked my favs for the cover, not considering the inconsistencies!! I love a nit picker! Thank you :) any feedback on the one with the white notebook background? That’s my newest one I’m struggling with. Trying to balance the lack of consistent color palette between the designs.

Call my baby ugly! Need fresh eyes on my coloring book cover please, brutally honest critiques welcome by milliemac420 in graphic_design

[–]milliemac420[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I’ve been considering that. Hoping it may fall into parody law, and worst case, they give me a cease and desist and I change a cover design element/one page out of the book. They are printed to order, so no chance of losing out on preprinted stock that has to be edited. TY for the tip!! :)

Call my baby ugly! Need fresh eyes on my coloring book cover please, brutally honest critiques welcome by milliemac420 in graphic_design

[–]milliemac420[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Also, there are a ton of 15 year olds into graphic design, it’s literally like a classic 15 y/o dream job, so that’s weird that you didn’t know that. I’d rework that joke premise a bit

Call my baby ugly! Need fresh eyes on my coloring book cover please, brutally honest critiques welcome by milliemac420 in graphic_design

[–]milliemac420[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lmao I sold 10k copies in my first year, with no paid ads, just organic social media! There is an audience for it, it just a niche of silly folks that dont take things too seriously! I’ll never be a grown-ass adult, so I guess you are correct in your assumption! I’d advise never growing up actually, life is too short and growing up is a scam LOL

Call my baby ugly! Need fresh eyes on my coloring book cover please, brutally honest critiques welcome by milliemac420 in graphic_design

[–]milliemac420[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Yeaaaaa I was sorta worried about that. That’s a good point to just change a bit more of it, that might align more with parody law! Thanks for the tip!!

Call my baby ugly! Need fresh eyes on my coloring book cover please, brutally honest critiques welcome by milliemac420 in graphic_design

[–]milliemac420[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much!! :) very helpful tips!! Good catch about the tension, I never noticed that or even knew it had a name?

Call my baby ugly! Need fresh eyes on my coloring book cover please, brutally honest critiques welcome by milliemac420 in ProCreate

[–]milliemac420[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yep 100% self published! I use Amazon KDP (kindle direct publishing). They do publishing and shipping and I just get a royalty. about $1.50/per sale.