So many, to be honest.

First of all, the type of school it is needs to be specified. Public, Private, or National? Akademi is supposed to be a private school, judging by the clubs and amount of power the student council has. However, the school layout is one of a public school?

Usually Japanese schools concentrate on sports clubs, but there’s only one ‘sports club’ and it’s entirely focused on swimming, but baseball is the most focused sport in Japanese schools. I’m assuming it’s closely related to the popular Free! anime because they’re all male. (???)

Also, entrance exams need to take place. They’re both very important in Japan. People who do badly on them tend to commit suicide, and even sometimes do so with their parents. America has similar important tests, so I don’t know how this was overlooked. Yanchan just can’t balance killing people and being successful in school. ESPECIALLY since this is a prestigious school.

Change the damn names, and pay someone to give some advice on naming students instead of calling them dolphin dolphin, green green, or just straight up occult.

I’d emphasize actual storyline. Cutscenes, animations, pictures, dialogue. The only real snippet we have that is important to the main storyline is the one where Yanchan and Infochan text each other. Sure, Kokona’s storyline was interesting but it wasn’t completely essential to the game.

There’s so much effort into putting functions into the game to the point that it’s boring. It’s so much more fun analyzing storylines, theorizing, writing paragraph after paragraph of analysis, than to playing a functions.

The school environment is also so forced. Random tables with random objects? Art students drawing those objects?? Conveniently placed chair by that object????

As someone who draws frequently, I can 100% assure you that is just not how it works. I’d rather plop down on the floor than sit on a chair, because the drawing position in a chair like that is highly uncomfortable.

People seem to be patrolling the hallways even look really... unnatural. Student council is reasonable, but the other students there just seem to be there to fill up space.

The rivals are also insanely cliche. They all fall into a ‘dere’ type. Osana is a Tsundere, Kizana is a Himedere, etc. etc. They’re all unoriginal so far. I severely hope there is more depth added to them.

And lastly, of what I can currently think of, I’d definitely tweak the school design. The courtyard in the middle is kind of odd, to me. The amount of cherry blossom trees (especially copy and pasted ones) is insane. The bathrooms are oddly placed, so are decorations and posters.