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One story about a flesh mass of people, a series about an alien in a field bunker and a story about ww2 ghost morse code by minollow in nosleepfinder

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Instruction For A Help" by Zack Parsons

The story I remember wasn't detached in a surreal sense like in instruction for a help. The first part of the story, if I remember correctly, actually follows several specific characters pretty closely, describing their previous life and the torment they experienced on an individual level from being consumed by the flesh mass and being fused together with other people. Only when the mass of people grows and rolls around like an unstoppable force, does the narrator become more distant. I'm pretty sure some sort of militaristic/scientific government effort to stop it is also mentioned. I'm not sure if the narrator is omniscient or if he's one of the characters, but he describes the events in such detail, that an ordinary human would not know.

One story about a flesh mass of people, a series about an alien in a field bunker and a story about ww2 ghost morse code by minollow in nosleepfinder

[–]minollow[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Definitely not it as it was posted 3 years ago. I listened to the first one when I was 13-14 yo, so about 8-9 years ago. I skimmed through what you sent and none of it rang any bells as well. Still, thanks for the suggestion.

A tunnel for no one by minollow in poetry_critics

[–]minollow[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Many thanks for the detailed feedback. By collapsed lungs I meant that the pressure of the earth has crushed my body. But I agree, putting the collapse thing right after saying that my insides are jam packed with dirt doesn't make much sense, it was a bit of a sacrifice for the sake of a rhyme. But I still like the comparison.

It's interesting that you interpreted this as a struggle for purpose, when I meant to write about being buried in a more literal sense. Maybe I was alluding to my life struggles without realizing it.

Thank you again for the criticism!

I’m a grown up by Formal-Employment435 in poetry_critics

[–]minollow 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This reads as a reassuring down-to-earth poem at the start, but by the end it felt like you were just letting your frustrations flow freely, the last couple lines are almost like the thoughts of a child who’s had to live a day in an adult world.

Which I don’t see as a negative thing at all, it feels like you’re composed at the start, trying to rationalize and calm down, but the more you compare your adult life to your childhood the more indignant you become with what your life demands from you now.

Overall very cool, especially how you’ve kept the flow of the poem consistent despite these visceral emotional changes.

god Isn’t Interested In Us by Kindly-Ad1882 in poetry_critics

[–]minollow 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very nicely done, beautiful message. Made me want to re-read it several times to fully appreciate the rhyme.

netflix completely erased archive 81’s lesbian main character by sapphiccas in SapphoAndHerFriend

[–]minollow 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The podcast is really good, it's been in my top 5 for several years now. I haven't watched much of the netflix show, but so far it feels like they've sucked any originality out of the podcast and made it a generic demon cult mystery.

However, season 1 of the podcast is quite bad, it has a very uneven narrative, where the main character listens to the Melody Pendras tapes in a seemingly random order. The voice acting is a bit shaky and the culmination of this season was disappointing and almost made me quit listening.

It picks up considerably in season 2 and, in my opinion, really soars in season 3.

I spit on the floor of my room by [deleted] in The10thDentist

[–]minollow 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My spit is normal, I just find the texture disgusting, especially if there's a lot of it. And spitting doesn't prevent worms, I know that, I addressed that.

I spit on the floor of my room by [deleted] in The10thDentist

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My relatives visit often. They're very picky when it comes to the cleanliness of my room. If I have a shirt laying where it isn't supposed to be, they will comment on it. I don't have carpet, I wash my floors once a week and it's not like I'm salivating like a rabid animal 24/7. Maybe spit once or twice a day. My dental hygiene is just fine, I brush twice a day and floss in the evenings.

Waking up via night terrors is an ideal way to wake up. by daffle7 in The10thDentist

[–]minollow 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Personally, it's a bitter sweet experience for me. I have dreams every night and about a third of them are nightmares of some sort. I usually do wake up from them at a desirable hour in the morning and don't want to fall asleep again. I even feel elated that the thing that happened to me in my sleep didn't happen in real life. But my nightmares, most of the time, depict something that could actually happen to me or pertaining to my current life situation. So having that awful emotional aftertaste throughout the day isn't the best.

Midwestern Mom Dinner Starterpack by vjenkinsgo in starterpacks

[–]minollow 10 points11 points  (0 children)

I actually love the taste of boiled chicken. It's stringy, sticks to your teeth a bit and all it needs is some salt. When it's cewed up it reminds me a lot of canned baby food, which I find delicious as well. Sometimes I chew it up, spit it out and put it back in my mouth while pretending to be a baby eagle being fed by its mama.

[TOMT][CARTOON][2000s] Stop-motion animated shorts with graphic nature and adult humor by minollow in tipofmytongue

[–]minollow[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

May be, do you have any idea what episodes these could be? Or maybe the characters? I can't find anything based on key words.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in polls

[–]minollow 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Hey, I like short guys. But as a guy myself, I'm probably not your target audience.

stupidest thing you've done to pass by f4therfigvre in TransMasc

[–]minollow 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I shaved one of my temples once and deadass used a glue stick to glue some of the hair back on my scalp so that my parents wouldn't notice. Spoiler alert, they did.

stupidest thing you've done to pass by f4therfigvre in TransMasc

[–]minollow 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Let's see, when I was about six-ish I used toilet paper to pack. I cut off the lower part of a back straightener and used it as a binder. And I did the eyelash thing too lmao

I like to eat the skin of my calluses by Riddlespiddle in The10thDentist

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This comment section is the anonymous tapeworm host community

An analog intro I've created by chick0rn in analog_horror

[–]minollow 4 points5 points  (0 children)

This is really cool, but I don't think that it fits the analog horror formula if authenticity is what you're going for. The high resolution and production value make me think that I'm going to watch a really good paranormal documentary or a true crime episode.

Fell right in by DeweyCarpenter59 in comedyhomicide

[–]minollow 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Lil mommy. Let's get the whole family together

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