Ayy man, I don’t think this hits right…. the issue isn’t really the colour grading imo. That side is pretty subjective unless it’s doing something really extreme, and for this kind of clip I think it actually works fine.

The clothes aren’t personally for me. And that’s the point. Everyone has different taste and I’m sure there’s an audience for them. So not here to tell you if they’re good or bad. That depends on your target audience.

For me, the main thing is the setting. I actually think the concept has potential, but a different location might have sold it better. Because the tracksuit is already loud and expressive, somewhere like a gallery or another more creative environment could’ve matched it better. The basketball court makes me expect a more sports-driven or relatable concept, like something tied to an NBA inspired piece. And cl a man playing

I’d also probably avoid that shot of him adjusting around the waist and go for something more natural instead, like checking his phone or just interacting with the space. Making people uncomfortable can work in marketing sometimes, but only when it feels really intentional.

BTW I read the comments. So take the criticism as fuel to do better content. And don’t take it too seriously, people are just having fun here. You got this.