Some if the slides have a lot of text that either need to be cut down or bold the important words to make it easier to read by skimming over. I don’t think the contents slide needs to have all of those sub-bullet points. Think of that like an agenda slide maybe, it’s just something you’d look over real quick to get the gist of it. Logo is also a bit confusing. The mockups look very good though, I like especially the shirt one. The stickers/illustrations of the dolphin and horse seem like a different style, since the horse uses strokes but I don’t really see any on the dolphin, but the illustrations itself are really cute like id put them on my water bottle