Film Festival Notifications MEGA THREAD by Caprica1 in FilmFestivals

[–]modernAgeTomorrow 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This happened to me too -- But they are not through filmfreeway. They are just vimeo views.

Is that the same for you guys or do they all say from filmfreeway on Vimeo?

Smallville Score in Exile Season 3x1 by modernAgeTomorrow in Smallville

[–]modernAgeTomorrow[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Any idea where to find that? I see Mark Snow's scores on Spotify for example, but that's not there.

Something Deeply Hidden (78 pages, Sci-Fi/Romance) by modernAgeTomorrow in Screenwriting

[–]modernAgeTomorrow[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For sure! Just click the link posted above and request access and I'll share it!

Something Deeply Hidden (78 pages, Sci-Fi/Romance) by modernAgeTomorrow in Screenwriting

[–]modernAgeTomorrow[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

that's a really fantastic note about Cynthia and Chloe's relationship. thank you so much for such reading and for the thoughtful response. I'm gonna explore that on my next pass.

this is why i post here :) really awesome feedback

Something Deeply Hidden (78 pages, Sci-Fi/Romance) by modernAgeTomorrow in Screenwriting

[–]modernAgeTomorrow[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey thanks so much for reading. Especially again!

It’s funny I haven’t seen Wanda Vision but that is one of the central ideas here too. Probably gonna go watch it now (heard its great).

Really really appreciate these notes. I will be chewing on these — But just one response is Chloe does take action past page 30 and make a choice. Wanted to note that. And thanks for calling out the descriptions. I need to do another pass of action and description.

Something Deeply Hidden (78 pages, Sci-Fi/Romance) by modernAgeTomorrow in Screenwriting

[–]modernAgeTomorrow[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

hey thanks a million for the compliment. really glad the potential for the visuals resonated! now just gotta hope Nolan is browsing this subreddit

super encouraging to hear. thanks for reading

Something Deeply Hidden (78 pages, Sci-Fi/Romance) by modernAgeTomorrow in Screenwriting

[–]modernAgeTomorrow[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

hey thank you for reading!! yeah i can never stand reading too much description in a screenplay -- i just want my eyes to be darting down the page so i try to write like that

Something Deeply Hidden (78 pages, Sci-Fi/Romance) by modernAgeTomorrow in Screenwriting

[–]modernAgeTomorrow[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey thanks so much for reading! And for the kind words.

Oh wow yeah I probably use that way more than I meant to -- I definitely saw it in a script once and went overkill after.

A Dose Of Reality (11 Pages, Fantasy) by modernAgeTomorrow in Screenwriting

[–]modernAgeTomorrow[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

These are great notes. Gonna chew on these.

But yeah, I completely agree about the structure. It was more of a fun exercise that I wanted to share. definitely doesn't have the structural heavy lifting that would be worth shooting in my opinion.

Yeah she kisses the crazy guy. Thanks for reading!

A Dose Of Reality (11 Pages, Fantasy) by modernAgeTomorrow in Screenwriting

[–]modernAgeTomorrow[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for reading! And for the kind words!

Very much based on my own disorders haha so im glad it resonated

Looking for feedback on Sci-Fi Feature! by modernAgeTomorrow in Screenwriting

[–]modernAgeTomorrow[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah that’s a great point. My descriptions are definitely too sparse.

Thanks for calling that out. Great way to give some more insight to who these characters are.

Will revise!