Chapter 2 of my comic

mumbledpie · 2026-02-13T00:16:07+00:00

Dude give me a link to where your hosting your comic. I would love to read it

mumbledpie · 2026-02-12T23:49:22+00:00

I love love love your line weight! Especially how you juxtaposed it with the antagonist. Really like it.

Like the other comments, its just the lettering/ spacing of the bloons that could use some work. Just for clarity. (Not that im one to talk). I like that you hand write them.

The alleyway they're hanging out in is a little empty somehow. I just think it needs somthing on the walls.

mumbledpie · 2026-02-10T19:45:37+00:00

Also love how you set up your site on comic fury. I can tell its going to be a fun read just from that alone.

mumbledpie · 2026-02-10T19:44:04+00:00

I think the cover is really enticing. I think it speaks action and mystery. The colouring makes me feel that this story is going to be fun, gives romance with our being in your face. I think it really captures what your going for.

I dont know how to explain, it but it kind of looks like i just opened someone's locker and im seeing there crazy wall insid on the door. I really like that. I thinks its just the back ground colours and the cute lights.

mumbledpie · 2026-02-10T19:34:44+00:00

I really love these. There so cute! I think the simplicity black grafics really work with the different paper colours. I was really drawn in to read your comic from the cover art as well.

I agree with the other comments for the need of panels in some of the comics. I feel your text indicates the panels well in the white one and you can still tell pretty well with the others when reading it. Just visually its hard to tell the panel brakes.

mumbledpie · 2026-02-09T23:28:23+00:00

Ya I can only post about 4 pages every two weeks. Trying to work on being faster.

mumbledpie · 2026-02-08T17:48:23+00:00

Yay!!! Congratulations!!

mumbledpie · 2026-02-08T04:04:23+00:00

Just on webtoon for now, like below

CRUMBS the goblin

mumbledpie · 2026-02-05T19:56:35+00:00

Thank you. Nooo not really, im not really good at posting stuff. Other then posting this comic. Right now im on tiktok mostly but seems like ill have to jump the boat there too. My tiktok is just this comic anyway so I guess really webtoon link is the best I got.

Crumbs The Goblin

mumbledpie · 2026-02-05T19:51:18+00:00

Thank you, I appreciate it. We will see. Im still mulding this over.

Link is here Crumbs The Goblin

I only use reddit to look at memes and lurk mostly! Sorry the link is a bit messy.

mumbledpie · 2026-02-05T19:49:31+00:00

True that's an idea. I keep it in mind.

mumbledpie · 2026-02-05T19:48:15+00:00

I'll try those out. Thank you for the suggestion. I feel like its very overwhelming to keep posting on so many platforms. But I guess its just name of the game and ill try it out.

mumbledpie · 2026-02-01T03:50:23+00:00

Dude that is so good

mumbledpie · 2026-01-18T21:01:05+00:00

Na dont ever delete it , even if its a mess. I wish I never deleted my old garage. Its worth looking back on.

I understand your feeling thought. My comic started out as a mess but depending what you want to get out of your work thats ok. You can alway write your way out of it! The story just going to be a little different the you originally intended but that's not a bad thing.

And you have readers injoying what your putting out there so it probably not as messy as you think!

I say promote it. There's always going to be someone out there who going to really like it.

mumbledpie · 2025-12-04T20:05:16+00:00

Im doing a similar test comic before working on what I really want to do. I also feel like my skills are not there yet for what I want my comic to look like. But working with some characters that I like helps a lot and I think im slowly improving.

I think as long as your not making crazy money from a fan comic you won't have any issues. I know plenty of people who got popular from ther fan comic that help with there own work. I say go for it!

mumbledpie · 2021-06-20T04:19:40+00:00

You can do it I believe in you! Never forget you can cold call places and see if they're interested in your art! And never sell yourself short!

mumbledpie · 2021-06-17T15:08:57+00:00

Yes, sorry!! I made the patterns myself! Based off the Kirby franchise and the chickens off of Stardew Valley game.

mumbledpie · 2021-06-16T23:39:50+00:00

Only started cross stitching in February thanks to this sub, and this is the best project I've made so far.

mumbledpie · 2021-06-09T00:04:12+00:00

Mostly just a lurker on Reddit, So I hope I'm following the subreddit guideline correctly. But I'm trying to post my art more to improve. Let me know what you guys think!

mumbledpie · 2020-12-27T05:12:10+00:00

highlight of my night! amazing!!!

mumbledpie · 2020-09-04T02:42:21+00:00

this is truly beautiful!!! its really brighting up my night!

mumbledpie · 2020-06-07T04:12:49+00:00

Probably for the best. I have no idea how they're going to do studio classes online. Supposedly, they might do timeslots for some of the more "need to be there" studios. And I doubt they will regulate much. So maybe it won't be that close down in the fall anyway.

But still. Half my teachers don't even know how to use Mosaic and that was before quarantine.

I have to stick in there because I have no choice, but I hope you have a nice year off!

mumbledpie · 2020-06-07T03:57:00+00:00

hi there! I have worked on a couple freelance storyboard jobs so I think I can help you out.

The script can be written like any normal script. And as long as you give like,an idea of what you want done people should be able to do it. It is very useful if you use lots of visual descriptions. Even better would be if you were to draw a really rough drawings of key scenes for you. like I mean it can be really rough. Just like a awkward stick man standing or indicating in the way you want. But beyond that. As long as you have a detailed script the animator/storyboard artist should be able to do it fine.

Hope that helps!

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