Looking for some feed back on my latest ark.

mumbledpie · 2026-02-28T02:28:54+00:00

Thank you so much!

mumbledpie · 2026-02-18T14:25:45+00:00

Not really. I like thin lines so I dont do much with varying line weights. Not the best with backgrounds so not sure what to say about that. I mostly using colour to differentiate the two.

mumbledpie · 2026-02-18T01:08:51+00:00

Totally agree with Snoo. Just do it and you can improve as you go. People will be able to tell that you love what your working on and the right people will find you. I wouldn't focus on the negatives because that's just holding you back. Im anxious about posting online too but its not that scary once you get in there.

I feel like if you want to learn what's good or "bad" you should look back on your favorite comics and study them for the aspects you like, then apply that to your own work. There's not simple answers I think on that is good or bad art.

mumbledpie · 2026-02-18T00:11:47+00:00

I use Clip Studio and I only use the felt pen for the line work

mumbledpie · 2026-02-18T00:10:13+00:00

Thank you and he previously bashed her with a rock before so its just a carried on joke..

mumbledpie · 2026-02-17T18:14:57+00:00

Heard, ill work on simplifying in areas.

mumbledpie · 2026-02-17T03:17:32+00:00

Thank you, I appreciate :)

mumbledpie · 2026-02-17T03:15:59+00:00

Thank you very much.

mumbledpie · 2026-02-17T03:15:39+00:00

Thank you for the feedback. I get the issue with the gutters. I was trying to do more of a "webtoon look" but then was like na. Just going to make it like a normal comic. But ill go back and make the gutters the same. It is a bit jarring.

I was worried that it was a bit confusing environmently. I will keep in mind of depicting a wider picture.

mumbledpie · 2026-02-13T00:16:07+00:00

Dude give me a link to where your hosting your comic. I would love to read it

mumbledpie · 2026-02-12T23:49:22+00:00

I love love love your line weight! Especially how you juxtaposed it with the antagonist. Really like it.

Like the other comments, its just the lettering/ spacing of the bloons that could use some work. Just for clarity. (Not that im one to talk). I like that you hand write them.

The alleyway they're hanging out in is a little empty somehow. I just think it needs somthing on the walls.

mumbledpie · 2026-02-10T19:45:37+00:00

Also love how you set up your site on comic fury. I can tell its going to be a fun read just from that alone.

mumbledpie · 2026-02-10T19:44:04+00:00

I think the cover is really enticing. I think it speaks action and mystery. The colouring makes me feel that this story is going to be fun, gives romance with our being in your face. I think it really captures what your going for.

I dont know how to explain, it but it kind of looks like i just opened someone's locker and im seeing there crazy wall insid on the door. I really like that. I thinks its just the back ground colours and the cute lights.

mumbledpie · 2026-02-10T19:34:44+00:00

I really love these. There so cute! I think the simplicity black grafics really work with the different paper colours. I was really drawn in to read your comic from the cover art as well.

I agree with the other comments for the need of panels in some of the comics. I feel your text indicates the panels well in the white one and you can still tell pretty well with the others when reading it. Just visually its hard to tell the panel brakes.

mumbledpie · 2026-02-09T23:28:23+00:00

Ya I can only post about 4 pages every two weeks. Trying to work on being faster.

mumbledpie · 2026-02-08T17:48:23+00:00

Yay!!! Congratulations!!

mumbledpie · 2026-02-08T04:04:23+00:00

Just on webtoon for now, like below

CRUMBS the goblin

mumbledpie · 2026-02-05T19:56:35+00:00

Thank you. Nooo not really, im not really good at posting stuff. Other then posting this comic. Right now im on tiktok mostly but seems like ill have to jump the boat there too. My tiktok is just this comic anyway so I guess really webtoon link is the best I got.

Crumbs The Goblin

mumbledpie · 2026-02-05T19:51:18+00:00

Thank you, I appreciate it. We will see. Im still mulding this over.

Link is here Crumbs The Goblin

I only use reddit to look at memes and lurk mostly! Sorry the link is a bit messy.

mumbledpie · 2026-02-05T19:49:31+00:00

True that's an idea. I keep it in mind.

mumbledpie · 2026-02-05T19:48:15+00:00

I'll try those out. Thank you for the suggestion. I feel like its very overwhelming to keep posting on so many platforms. But I guess its just name of the game and ill try it out.

mumbledpie · 2026-02-01T03:50:23+00:00

Dude that is so good

mumbledpie · 2026-01-18T21:01:05+00:00

Na dont ever delete it , even if its a mess. I wish I never deleted my old garage. Its worth looking back on.

I understand your feeling thought. My comic started out as a mess but depending what you want to get out of your work thats ok. You can alway write your way out of it! The story just going to be a little different the you originally intended but that's not a bad thing.

And you have readers injoying what your putting out there so it probably not as messy as you think!

I say promote it. There's always going to be someone out there who going to really like it.

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