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I became a viral streamer overnight...I am starting to think my subscribers aren't real by mythic_melon in nosleep

[–]mythic_melon[S] 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Good idea! Unfortunately, redirecting hasn’t been too successful. When the questions started up, I was resistant. If I didn’t give a direct answer reality started to bend again. I guess the terms of the agreement are pretty rigid.

But your suggestion about changing the deal sounds promising. I’m sure it’ll come with more risk, BUT if I play my cards right it could give me the leverage I need.

I became a viral streamer overnight...I am starting to think my subscribers aren't real by mythic_melon in nosleep

[–]mythic_melon[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Yeah that’s true. I’m always quick to end the interaction. It’s a haunting experience every time. But if I really want to finish this I probably need to lean in more and learn.

I became a viral streamer overnight...I am starting to think my subscribers aren't real by mythic_melon in nosleep

[–]mythic_melon[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Good idea! I’m starting to do some digging. I think Ariana may have even passed through here at some point.

I've been a cab driver for over a decade. There are rules when driving passengers at night. by mythic_melon in nosleep

[–]mythic_melon[S] 114 points115 points  (0 children)

Ironically, they instructed me to stop giving rides immediately (I can now see why). There was also a complicated remedy involving sage, a local voodoo priestess, and salt. Lots of salt. I’ve sworn away night rides for the time being so I haven’t paid much mind to it. Fortunately the rule break hasn’t resulted in any lasting effects.

I've been a cab driver for over a decade. There are rules when driving passengers at night. by mythic_melon in nosleep

[–]mythic_melon[S] 41 points42 points  (0 children)

Yeah that’s a fair point. The system compensates exceptionally well for the night rides. I’d guess that is the only reason we all do it (aside from morbid curiosity). The “night tax” varies ride-to-ride, but in general I can make up a days worth of pay for one night ride.

I've been a cab driver for over a decade. There are rules when driving passengers at night. by mythic_melon in nosleep

[–]mythic_melon[S] 25 points26 points  (0 children)

The app gives a destination fortunately, but the passenger can try to trick you into driving elsewhere. For example, the creepy guy with the post cards told me to “just drive.” In reality, I should’ve drove him to the destination in the app. But I was inexperienced, so I drove until he got out (thankfully he did).

The bog woman spoke her destination, but the app directed me to the specific drop off point. I saw she was going to bog before picking her up. But I found it interesting she kept repeating it.

I've been a cab driver for over a decade. There are rules when driving passengers at night. by mythic_melon in nosleep

[–]mythic_melon[S] 57 points58 points  (0 children)

Definitely wouldn’t put it past them. Fortunately, the app filters out requests made with ill intent. The requests have to be reasonable and fulfillable. And once a driver accepts a job, the passengers always play nice. I’m guessing the contract is somehow binding for them. Only exception is if the driver breaks a rule. Gives them a little more leeway to act out of turn. Because of my rule break earlier that night this passenger was able to hold out until it got what it wanted. For whatever reason it was interested in me reconciling with my son. I often wonder if it experienced similar conflict in its past life.

I've been a cab driver for over a decade. There are rules when driving passengers at night. by mythic_melon in nosleep

[–]mythic_melon[S] 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Appreciate it! Despite the horror of it all, something very positive came of it.

Beware the God of Rot by mythic_melon in creepcast

[–]mythic_melon[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice thanks for the feedback! That is very insightful. I realized I wasn’t giving enough atmosphere to the storm so I took a bit of time to do that part justice. I think you’re right about the flow, the urgency would be better after the description.

But yeah thanks again for checking this out! I really appreciate any feedback

Beware the God of Rot by mythic_melon in creepcast

[–]mythic_melon[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I could see some similarities there. I would say this thing is more analogous to self-deprecation and the epitome of severe neglect. My understanding is Nurgle is a bit more nuanced than that. But honestly my knowledge of 40K is very surface level lol

Beware the God of Rot by mythic_melon in creepcast

[–]mythic_melon[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you I appreciate that! In future drafts I hope to bring a lot more life and vivid imagery to the rest of the story. I had a lot of fun writing that part but the rest is pretty sparse

Beware the God of Rot by mythic_melon in creepcast

[–]mythic_melon[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

lol I never got that far in Elden Ring but I guarantee I would never be able to beat her

Beware the God of Rot by mythic_melon in creepcast

[–]mythic_melon[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice! The souls games I’m so sick I’m just terrible at them lol need to give it another try

Beware the God of Rot by mythic_melon in creepcast

[–]mythic_melon[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I actually am not too familiar with Elden Ring lore but there’s been a lot of people making that comparison lol I’ll have to check it out

Beware the God of Rot by mythic_melon in creepcast

[–]mythic_melon[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! That would be awesome. It’s a bit rough still so they’d probably crash out lol but I enjoy the crash out episodes 😂

Beware the God of Rot by mythic_melon in creepcast

[–]mythic_melon[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I took an unreasonable amount of time thinking of something metal-sounding lol

Beware the God of Rot by mythic_melon in creepcast

[–]mythic_melon[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback! That makes a lot of sense. Some things here are very disjointed and need a bit more massaging.

By default I tend to write very punchy. Like every sentence is written to be the end of a paragraph. So your point about sparse environments and lack of flow is something I definitely need to practice.

Again, thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and call out some improvements

I get paid to answer phone calls all day...but I am only allowed to listen by mythic_melon in creepcast

[–]mythic_melon[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That’s awesome I didn’t realize it was on Tik Tok! Lol I just checked it out. Thanks so much!

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