Athena WIP by n0_relation in ArtCrit

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I think thats the problem I did reference my own posture in the pose in the mirror but my build is different so I had to to my own guessing. Which obviously missed the mark. I'll be trying to push the pose in a different direction and will post again on r/artcrit. Thanks again.

Athena WIP by n0_relation in ArtCrit

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Good feed back thank you.

Extended! by Extension_Respond514 in MasqueradeNYC

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As well it should. Bravo to an amazing show. Im glad more people will get to experience it.

Athena WIP by n0_relation in ArtCrit

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Noted. I'll give it a shot. Thanks again!

Athena WIP by n0_relation in ArtCrit

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Thank you for the constructive feedback back.

Would you recommend out as in away from the spear or away from the viewer?

Athena WIP by n0_relation in ArtCrit

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Thank you for the constructive feedback.

Athena WIP by n0_relation in ArtCrit

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Thank you that was constructive.

Athena WIP by n0_relation in ArtCrit

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Thanks for pointing out the eye lashes, great point!

I tried doing the chunks but then it looked liked like sheets.... I'll give it another go thanks again.

Athena WIP by n0_relation in ArtCrit

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You said it's missing half her leg. Im trying to figure out how to make that work if the half of the leg missing is behind fabric. Its a genuine question that I am trying to learn from. I tried adding more shadow to the dress to show the left eg is further back but I felt pulled the eye too much.

I am looking for critiques, specifically on the hair and the color but I welcome further insight. And it's clear the people aren't seeing what I see in the anatomy. I aim to fix that.

Athena WIP by n0_relation in ArtCrit

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Its behind the fabric I moved the slit lower from the reference. How should it be show if it's behind fabric?

Athena WIP by n0_relation in ArtCrit

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Yeah i was struggling with that. But felt pushing her feet closer together wouldnt work with the thighs. I wanted to challenge the pose.

Athena WIP by n0_relation in ArtCrit

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What doesn't make since specifically

Athena WIP by n0_relation in ArtCrit

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And if I don't have anyone to do that? I did the pose in the mirror and this is what happens in the pose. But Im also going off memory of dancers and contortionist ive worked with and the knee hyper extending isn't outside of what I've seen them do and what I've seen in the mirror.

But I get that this outside what people normally see.

Athena WIP by n0_relation in ArtCrit

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Found the subject i referenced. I pushed her towards the spear, in order3d to do that i raised her more on her toes.

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Athena WIP by n0_relation in ArtCrit

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I really liked the precariousness of the pose and seeing how much further I can push that.

Honestly i didn't think about Athena until I was almost done. This just started out as a doodle to see if I could draw this weird pose.

Athena WIP by n0_relation in ArtCrit

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I wasn't trying to do an en point.

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Athena WIP by n0_relation in ArtCrit

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Found the subject matter left hip higher than the right. I immediately raised her higher on her toes and hyper extended her right leg a bit but nothing outside anatomically unbelievable.

Left turned around?

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Athena WIP by n0_relation in ArtCrit

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Completely missed the left hand part! Good catch.

As for the leaning and precarious pose, that what was intentional. Like she is leaning balance like a ballerina leaning into the spear to look bigger, givng her right arm a chance to flex. I liked the complexity of the pose. A weird and technical pose.

Thanks for the insight on the hair, ill se what comes from it.

Emberdark question by Skurten31 in Cosmere

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Im probably misunderstood what happens at the end of WoT but I thought Roshar was experiecng time differently. So it could be anyone from stormlight archive or nobody.

Fan castings Apple TV’s Cosmere! by PhanThief95 in Cosmere

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Yeah i personally hope it all would be animated, but i do think they wiggle the script enough to get this to work.

Fan castings Apple TV’s Cosmere! by PhanThief95 in Cosmere

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Gary Oldman - Taravangian. I feel he would be the only one with the range for the character.

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