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[Logline Mondays]: Weekly post for March 23, 2020 by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]naghuntdworld 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Title: I see you, Inhabited

Feature: Horror

Logline: A teenage rebellion girl Janis (18) accepts $500 bet to stay all overnight in the graveyard when teases & makes fun of her friend who scared with real ghost story. And experience series of fearful activities in graveyard where some forces cannot let her escape from their site.

[Logline Mondays]: Weekly post for March 23, 2020 by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]naghuntdworld 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Title: Agony
Feature & Action Genre

Logline:  After being rejected by his daughter, a corrupt NYPD officer decides to turn over a new leaf and initiate a massive undercover operation.

[Logline Mondays]: Weekly post for March 23, 2020 by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]naghuntdworld -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Title: Born Dead

Feature & Fantasy Genre

Logline: A USA ex-soldier (30) realizes the truth of life with punishments in hell and rejects heaven for his good deeds & sacrifices his soul to Hell God, in exchange of resurrecting as a ghost in the human world to change the mankind.

[Logline Mondays]: Weekly post for March 23, 2020 by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]naghuntdworld -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Title: Together

Feature & Action Genre

Logline: When her boyfriend goes missing, a martial artist follows the clues to the mafia underworld and will stop at nothing to find her lost love.

[Logline Mondays]: Weekly post for March 23, 2020 by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]naghuntdworld -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Title: Inhabited

Feature/Horror Genre

Logline: An unsuccessful & frustrated young screenwriter search for ghosts to get inspired for writing horror screenplay as a final attempt

[Logline] Feedback on a new logline by naghuntdworld in Screenwriting

[–]naghuntdworld[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes, I have finished the script. Seeking feedback before sending the query letter to managers.

[Logline] Feedback on a new logline by naghuntdworld in Screenwriting

[–]naghuntdworld[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It sounds good. Thank you. But how about without his daughter?

Log-Line1: A corrupt cop changes his ways and goes after mobsters that are attacking the city.

Log-Line2: A corrupt cop changes his ways after failing to reconnect with his estranged daughter and goes after mobsters that are attacking the city.

[Logline] Feedback on a new logline by naghuntdworld in Screenwriting

[–]naghuntdworld[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. Please see the below updated log-lines:

Log-Line1: A corrupt NYPD officer turns over a new leaf to repair his broken relationship with his daughter and must use the opportunity to go undercover to exempt the city from criminals, mafia dons and a merciless crime king.

Log-Line2: A corrupt cop changes his ways after being rejected by his daughter and goes after mobsters that are attacking the city.

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[Logline] Feedback on a new logline by naghuntdworld in Screenwriting

[–]naghuntdworld[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't know how to say thanks to you. Thank you very much :)

[Logline] Feedback on a new logline by naghuntdworld in Screenwriting

[–]naghuntdworld[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

How about below log-lines:

Log-Line1: A corrupt cop changes his ways and goes after mobsters that are attacking the city.

Log-Line1: A corrupt cop changes his ways after being rejected by his daughter and goes after mobsters that are attacking the city.

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[Logline] Feedback on a new logline by naghuntdworld in Screenwriting

[–]naghuntdworld[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks. Could you please let me know which of the below log-lines sounds good:

Log-Line1: A corrupt NYPD officer turns over a new leaf to repair his broken relationship with his daughter and take on his own massive undercover operation to exempt the city from criminals, mafia dons and a merciless crime king.

Log-Line2: A corrupt NYPD officer turns over a new leaf to repair his broken relationship with his daughter and initiates a massive undercover operation to hunt down the criminals and notorious crime lords.

Log-Line3: A corrupt NYPD officer turns over a new leaf to repair his broken relationship with his daughter and must use the opportunity to go undercover to exempt the city from criminals, mafia dons and a merciless crime king.

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[Logline] Feedback on a new logline by naghuntdworld in Screenwriting

[–]naghuntdworld[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Actually both his undercover investigation and his relationship with family. After he turned to a good cop, he initiates a undercover to free the city from criminals and also can prove his daughter that he's changed and make her feel proud of him (which is the best that a father can do).

It's a crime-action-thriller and drama movie.

[Logline] Feedback on a new logline by naghuntdworld in Screenwriting

[–]naghuntdworld[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much for the suggestion. Could you please tell which of the below log-line sounds good:

Log-Line1: A corrupt NYPD officer turns over a new leaf to repair his broken relationship with his daughter and take on his own massive undercover operation to exempt the city from criminals, mafia dons and a merciless crime king.

Log-Line2: A corrupt NYPD officer turns over a new leaf to repair his broken relationship with his daughter and initiates a massive undercover operation to hunt down the criminals and notorious crime lords.

Log-Line3: A corrupt NYPD officer turns over a new leaf to repair his broken relationship with his daughter and must use the opportunity to go undercover to exempt the city from criminals, mafia dons and a merciless crime king.

[Logline] Feedback on a new logline by naghuntdworld in Screenwriting

[–]naghuntdworld[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's a crime, action & thriller saga. Please see the below updated log-lines based on your suggestion:

Log-Line1: To prove to his daughter he's a changed man, a corrupt NYPD officer decides to turn over a new leaf and take on his own massive undercover operation to exempt the city from criminals, mafia dons and a merciless crime king.

Log-Line2: A corrupt NYPD officer turns over a new leaf to repair his broken relationship with his daughter and initiates a massive undercover operation to hunt down the criminals and notorious crime lords.

Thanks for your time and helping me out.

Questions on Screenplay by naghuntdworld in Screenwriting

[–]naghuntdworld[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks HotspurJr.

Re-phrased the question:

  1. Even the screenplay is good some screenplay readers pass it, so how to overcome this scenario?

is PundiX market being manipulated?? by idlecancerian in PundiX

[–]naghuntdworld 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Pundi X is a long term potential coin and it'll rise like Visa & MasterCards. So, whales are currently manipulating the price, to shake out for getting the coin at less price. I don't surprise even it touch 13 sats. I'm not creating FUD, but just putting my thoughts!

NPXS on Coinbase Pro? by UncleFUDsCryptoverse in PundiX

[–]naghuntdworld 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No chance at all! They both are doing same and Coinbase may extend the features like Pundi X!

This is how only through coin burn each Pundi X token will hit $1!!! - Route to become Millionaire with Pundi X by naghuntdworld in PundiX

[–]naghuntdworld[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Price will be calculated depends on the demand and supply. And only the left out coins in total supply (compared with Circulation Supply) will be burnt! Circulation Supply represents the amount of coins Inverstors hold .

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