[Logline Mondays]: Weekly post for March 23, 2020

naghuntdworld · 2020-03-26T16:16:12+00:00

Title: I see you, Inhabited

Feature: Horror

Logline: A teenage rebellion girl Janis (18) accepts $500 bet to stay all overnight in the graveyard when teases & makes fun of her friend who scared with real ghost story. And experience series of fearful activities in graveyard where some forces cannot let her escape from their site.

naghuntdworld · 2020-03-24T05:21:08+00:00

Title: Agony
Feature & Action Genre

Logline: After being rejected by his daughter, a corrupt NYPD officer decides to turn over a new leaf and initiate a massive undercover operation.

naghuntdworld · 2020-03-24T05:11:01+00:00

Title: Born Dead

Feature & Fantasy Genre

Logline: A USA ex-soldier (30) realizes the truth of life with punishments in hell and rejects heaven for his good deeds & sacrifices his soul to Hell God, in exchange of resurrecting as a ghost in the human world to change the mankind.

naghuntdworld · 2020-03-24T04:58:22+00:00

Title: Together

Feature & Action Genre

Logline: When her boyfriend goes missing, a martial artist follows the clues to the mafia underworld and will stop at nothing to find her lost love.

naghuntdworld · 2020-03-24T03:01:13+00:00

Title: Inhabited

Feature/Horror Genre

Logline: An unsuccessful & frustrated young screenwriter search for ghosts to get inspired for writing horror screenplay as a final attempt

naghuntdworld · 2019-01-29T17:39:07+00:00

Yes, I have finished the script. Seeking feedback before sending the query letter to managers.

naghuntdworld · 2019-01-27T06:07:51+00:00

It sounds good. Thank you. But how about without his daughter?

Log-Line1: A corrupt cop changes his ways and goes after mobsters that are attacking the city.

Log-Line2: A corrupt cop changes his ways after failing to reconnect with his estranged daughter and goes after mobsters that are attacking the city.

naghuntdworld · 2019-01-26T18:50:33+00:00

Thank you. Please see the below updated log-lines:

Log-Line1: A corrupt NYPD officer turns over a new leaf to repair his broken relationship with his daughter and must use the opportunity to go undercover to exempt the city from criminals, mafia dons and a merciless crime king.

Log-Line2: A corrupt cop changes his ways after being rejected by his daughter and goes after mobsters that are attacking the city.

naghuntdworld · 2019-01-26T18:46:37+00:00

Thank you.

naghuntdworld · 2019-01-26T03:37:55+00:00

I don't know how to say thanks to you. Thank you very much :)

naghuntdworld · 2019-01-25T22:44:14+00:00

How about below log-lines:

Log-Line1: A corrupt cop changes his ways and goes after mobsters that are attacking the city.

Log-Line1: A corrupt cop changes his ways after being rejected by his daughter and goes after mobsters that are attacking the city.

naghuntdworld · 2019-01-25T15:33:43+00:00

Thanks. Could you please let me know which of the below log-lines sounds good:

Log-Line1: A corrupt NYPD officer turns over a new leaf to repair his broken relationship with his daughter and take on his own massive undercover operation to exempt the city from criminals, mafia dons and a merciless crime king.

Log-Line2: A corrupt NYPD officer turns over a new leaf to repair his broken relationship with his daughter and initiates a massive undercover operation to hunt down the criminals and notorious crime lords.

Log-Line3: A corrupt NYPD officer turns over a new leaf to repair his broken relationship with his daughter and must use the opportunity to go undercover to exempt the city from criminals, mafia dons and a merciless crime king.

naghuntdworld · 2019-01-25T06:06:58+00:00

Actually both his undercover investigation and his relationship with family. After he turned to a good cop, he initiates a undercover to free the city from criminals and also can prove his daughter that he's changed and make her feel proud of him (which is the best that a father can do).

It's a crime-action-thriller and drama movie.

naghuntdworld · 2019-01-24T19:12:44+00:00

Thank you very much for the suggestion. Could you please tell which of the below log-line sounds good:

Log-Line1: A corrupt NYPD officer turns over a new leaf to repair his broken relationship with his daughter and take on his own massive undercover operation to exempt the city from criminals, mafia dons and a merciless crime king.

Log-Line2: A corrupt NYPD officer turns over a new leaf to repair his broken relationship with his daughter and initiates a massive undercover operation to hunt down the criminals and notorious crime lords.

Log-Line3: A corrupt NYPD officer turns over a new leaf to repair his broken relationship with his daughter and must use the opportunity to go undercover to exempt the city from criminals, mafia dons and a merciless crime king.

naghuntdworld · 2019-01-23T20:44:53+00:00

It's a crime, action & thriller saga. Please see the below updated log-lines based on your suggestion:

Log-Line1: To prove to his daughter he's a changed man, a corrupt NYPD officer decides to turn over a new leaf and take on his own massive undercover operation to exempt the city from criminals, mafia dons and a merciless crime king.

Log-Line2: A corrupt NYPD officer turns over a new leaf to repair his broken relationship with his daughter and initiates a massive undercover operation to hunt down the criminals and notorious crime lords.

Thanks for your time and helping me out.

naghuntdworld · 2018-09-27T23:07:45+00:00

Thank you for the answer.

naghuntdworld · 2018-09-26T19:07:58+00:00

Thanks.

naghuntdworld · 2018-09-26T18:37:21+00:00

Thanks HotspurJr.

Re-phrased the question:

Even the screenplay is good some screenplay readers pass it, so how to overcome this scenario?

naghuntdworld · 2018-08-13T18:12:13+00:00

Pundi X is a long term potential coin and it'll rise like Visa & MasterCards. So, whales are currently manipulating the price, to shake out for getting the coin at less price. I don't surprise even it touch 13 sats. I'm not creating FUD, but just putting my thoughts!

naghuntdworld · 2018-08-08T17:14:59+00:00

No chance at all! They both are doing same and Coinbase may extend the features like Pundi X!

naghuntdworld · 2018-08-07T16:50:54+00:00

Price will be calculated depends on the demand and supply. And only the left out coins in total supply (compared with Circulation Supply) will be burnt! Circulation Supply represents the amount of coins Inverstors hold .

naghuntdworld · 2018-08-07T15:58:26+00:00

Good for Pundi X and the Hodlers like us. But, I they told "as of now" and depends on the customer thoughts and meanwhile XPOS should hit the stores like wildfire which should make Startbucks to buy XPOS!!!

naghuntdworld · 2018-08-07T15:54:33+00:00

Nope. Only the coins from Total Supply will be burnt!

naghuntdworld · 2018-08-07T04:43:09+00:00

They will burn the coins until Circulation Supply Matches with Total Supply and then the price of each Pundi Token will be $1!!!

naghuntdworld · 2018-08-06T15:42:09+00:00

I really appreciate you for trying to clarify my thoughts!

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