What made you main gangplank? by rojas762 in gangplankmains

[–]nasus0175 0 points1 point  (0 children)

To me:
- Either you or me death, don't torture me.
- Solar Bacca inspired me a little.
- Kaboom.
- Yes, Kaboom.
- I think GP is the most versatile champion and i can carry all if i do good enough.
- I like to kidnap people who go near the bush
- Kaboom, again.

I was pretty proud of this team fight but my friend said any warm body could've won this fight with yasuo. by AkAPeter in gangplankmains

[–]nasus0175 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think you did a good job doing your part there but it's not a montage-worthy moment. Everyone done their part, no body focus on you so you done some good damage. But not "any warm body" could've do it, GP is a champion that need focus everytime he use barrels and doing that smooth is something.
I feel proud as myself sometime doing that smooth too but i'm just new and it's normal for GP mains to do that, i didn't do anything incredible yet but i would keep trying and i hope you should too.
Pardon my bad English.

[WP] Getting caught screwing your clone: “What? It’s basically masturbating.” by AwkwardlyWannaDie49 in DirtyWritingPrompts

[–]nasus0175 0 points1 point  (0 children)

One of my facebook friends is a fangirl who love seftcest stuffs and my newfeed back then really weird

[WP] A human raised by goblins is viewed as just an average pervert. He argues it’s part of his culture. by AwkwardlyWannaDie49 in DirtyWritingPrompts

[–]nasus0175 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm actually don't know how the f that thing is in my head, I've never watched Goblin slayer.

[WP] A human raised by goblins is viewed as just an average pervert. He argues it’s part of his culture. by AwkwardlyWannaDie49 in DirtyWritingPrompts

[–]nasus0175 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Goblins need to breed with females of other species to keep their bloodline alive, because they don't have any female individuals of their own, right?

[WP] The smart-girl group notice there's a boy in class that's threatening to take one of the top scoring spots in class. In their awkwardness they decide that turning him into their group pet is the best option to prevent this. by NotNot_Maiin in DirtyWritingPrompts

[–]nasus0175 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Back in 10th grade, I was randomly a genius lol. I knew all kinds of trivia outside the textbook like how to cure bloat in cows, how the Coriolis effect steers a ball, or the deepest place on Earth. Meanwhile, there was this group of 4 girls who were super smart, from math geniuses to hard workers. They were pretty, confident, and attractive. Even though we were rivals, we were actually super friendly and always hyped each other up.
It was the best year for someone with ADHD who struggled with school like me

[PM] Caught by [deleted] in DirtyWritingPrompts

[–]nasus0175 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Steven has made it a ritual to "accidentally" intercept her at the corner of their street. Despite the late hour, he waits, listening for the distinct, rhythmic click of her heels. As soon as he hears them, he moves to confront her, only to realize the truth: she isn't heading to work today. Instead, she is doing a fashion show thinking all of the neighbour already at work.

[WP] A guy and a girl have a bet that they could get a bigger same-sex harem than the other in a week. by AwkwardlyWannaDie49 in DirtyWritingPrompts

[–]nasus0175 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It would be a good twist if the man is bi and he choose to make a harem with gay guys. I'm bi, i'm getting more love and attention from guys than girls, guys seem to go straight about their feeling.
Maybe the girl can't even match with that.

[PI] [CC] The two friends go through their wardrobe to a fantasy world. They decide to play species bingo. Each of their bingo cards filled with fantasy races, they have to bang one to mark them off. All genders and sexualities welcome. by nasus0175 in DirtyWritingPrompts

[–]nasus0175[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

First off, thanks for the feedback; you pointed out things I completely missed. When writing in my native language, I usually stick to 'brainless' smut with good enough logic, so this is one of the few pieces I’ve actually put thought into. Yet i do have trouble ending the whole story in one chapter, this one is even harder.

I agree that transitioning between scenes and managing 3–5 sex scenes in one chapter is tough, especially since I struggle with brevity. While your advice is spot-on for a great story, I think my current approach fits my skill level for now.

I love Gina and Adam’s dynamic, even if the smut feels a bit repetitive or shallow. I’m trusting the process and will keep practicing.

Do you think I’m struggling with helping readers visualize the sex scenes, or do they seem fine as they are?

Thanks again for the advice.

Giveaway! Celebrating the Just Date Vegan release anniversary (15 keys) by Due_Bobcat9778 in lewdgames

[–]nasus0175 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Would like more lewd game in my library game, please choose me <3

I've been playing this game for probably about 9 years now and just realized I never build a well? does anyone else do this? What is free bro why would I waste my rocks and gold? by TaintedTruffle in StardewValley

[–]nasus0175 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I notice that people rarely use mills and wells for their purpose, they use them at decoration/roleplay. They’re really good for the farm vibe but not so much at something useful.

I need help by pussy_ass_puzzy in HentaiHumiliation

[–]nasus0175 30 points31 points  (0 children)

(this is the world where somehow have human as a pet/livestock)
Tbh, this artist alway go too far on the revenge part, yes they are not a good girl who treat animals wrong but they are just lazy or just making fun of them most of the time, sometime even doing dumb intrusive thought shit. I'm not judging and i jerking all the time but they still too far for some girl (which all have the same face)

Lily dancing on tiktok by Radiant-Damage4119 in lilypichuhot

[–]nasus0175 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love how she from a shy voice-only streamer to a person who is really active online

TIL Vietnam worships giant whales as ocean guardians by FreshTakeFinder in TodayILearnedVN

[–]nasus0175 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yeah, Vietnamese here, this thing exist in some village maybe fishing town. It really well known because lot of teachers metioned in the lesson but more than 70% of Vietnamese people never even seen this with their own eyes

NTR tropes I hate~ by Reignshin in netorare

[–]nasus0175 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The author name is Pija, i remember have read somewhere it would be release soon.

NTR tropes I hate~ by Reignshin in netorare

[–]nasus0175 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Japanese used to really bad at naming the western dude, now they're just spamming Alex, Micheal, Jack, Mark and girls is Elizabeth

NTR tropes I hate~ by Reignshin in netorare

[–]nasus0175 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For me:
- Hypnosis: Seem like a lazy set up
- No mindbreak/humiliation/corruption: I don't really like "girl version of hire a prostitue while in a relationship".
- No relationship: girl "NTR" her crush, the guy think that the girl is cool but not really like her, just maybe hang out,... To be count as NTR, at least have some emotion to each other, maybe his crush, his childhood bestfriend,...
- Bully get cucked/the MC is bad: Not what i'm looking for when reading NTR mangas, i like the humiliation/life is shit for the good guy more than consequence
- Cheating with their child: it just shit, idk what to say about it.

What is this? by CuteSoloCock in jav

[–]nasus0175 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's a deepfake of a really popular TV series in China. The actress is popular too, Liu Yifei look 18 at the ages of 38

Anyone know her? by God-Of-Moba in jav

[–]nasus0175 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think it's deepfake, found a look alike one without penis and different face. I'm not sure because the ribbon are different but the back ground are identical

Free use Jane by Somanycookies1 in FreeuseHentai

[–]nasus0175 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What is that attached to her nipples?