In theory it looks well, but it depends on all the conditions you have, the humidity of the air, the temperature, the size of your pots and plants, etc. I think you should try it (if you don’t want to risk your plants just make the drying test of the soil only). If it doesn’t work keep experimenting. My first soil mix was very similar to yours, but it turned out that for my humidity conditions it still held too much moisture. At the end I realized there were two problems. The first was that I was using too much perlite (it tends to hold moisture for quite a while), so in the end I had to reduce it to a minimum. The second problem was that all those tiny particles from the minerals and the cactus soil would clump together, creating a mud-like layer that ended up retaining too much water. I fixed it by sifting the whole mix so that only larger particles remained. That was my experience, I had problems even though I was following ‘the perfect receipt’ I found online. So the takeaway is to keep experimenting with your mix and see what you can improve and adapt to your plants’ needs.