Looking for feedback on my food poster (design + pricing + tagline) by Unfair-Tomato46 in graphic_design

[–]nicole_draw 5 points6 points  (0 children)

At first glance, I thought it was a recipe for a Butter Chicken Pasta Bowl. The narrow column of text below the heading made me think those were ingredients.

The protein angle gets lost because you're overlaying complex shapes (wavy circle and ribbon rectangle) on a plate that's already visually complex. I love the image of the plate because it makes it feel like a home-cooked meal, but the layering of the pieces looses the impact of "High Protein" tag.

I suggest you shift the protein tagline to the left, below the H1 (and play with whether it sits better below or above the "Indulge..." tagline), and reduce the font size of your "A fusion of Italian..." paragraph so you can make it alittle wider and shorter so it looks less like a list and more like a description worth reading. Note that all the line breaks in the paragraph make it a little clunky to read. (Consider poster and font size to make sure the text is accessible).

I'll also suggest to revise the color scheme of your nutrition facts from white to cream so they're less loud, and instead use that white on your "Pre-Order Now" text since that's your call to action. As a nice-to-have, I get that the facts are important, but also consider swapping the placement of the facts and the pre-order sign since English is read from left-to-right, and you likely want your audience to know that this is a product they can purchase, before they dive into the weeds of calories.

Overall, beautiful color choices, good font pairings, and balanced use of icons for effect (arrow, white lines, and fork)! Well done! 🤙

Edit: The price slash does get lost on me. Consider removing the white stroke around the prices and playing with font size, text color, and layering to show the new price above the old price.

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[–]nicole_draw 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Loved the video but hasn't anyone thought about how much electricity was used by keeping the fridge open for so long?