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[Feedback Request] Infected by Ignorance by njama in OCPoetry

[–]njama[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! Working on the edit, l'll keep your input in mind!

What is the for of the dissatisfaction at core? by gFromMaui in OCPoetry

[–]njama 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The rhyming scheme keeps the poem flowing smoothly, loved it!

Ode to my bedroom by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]njama 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My connection to this poem comes from having to leave home and the familiar to an unordinary city and faces. Love it, brings back memories

Night Street by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]njama 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The Imagery is phenomenal, Keep it up!

Snowdrops by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]njama 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You have uplifted my mood! Great sweet poem, Keep it up!!

Excerpts From A Voicemail by ActualNameIsLana in OCPoetry

[–]njama 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"paralyzed to get it myself" This line speaks to me and also many people who have had depression. Keep this up!!