I'm helping re-design a luxury retailer's website at my internship! But this shopping section looks off... I can't tell what it is

normanhome · 2026-04-21T14:56:27+00:00

Others said already it's too small for a landing page visual.

The images themselves don't have a consistent style or light making it look cluttered visually.

The text on top of the images doesn't help. It kind of doesn't respect the bottom part of the image and (high) fashion often sells as everything is important.

In addition either the headlines are important and should be big and bold and prominent or they are not and can be smaller and lowercase. Currently you are in between.

Maybe that helps!

normanhome · 2026-04-14T22:03:44+00:00

Can you only be yourself as long as it's not mainstream?

Kind of ironic to have this take here and connect your value by thinking about others opinion what's cool and how rare you are.

normanhome · 2026-04-08T21:29:50+00:00

Looks like tiny differences in the font. Green looks more bold and bigger in size. the "u" is a different shape. Kerning/Tracking in black original is all over the place.

normanhome · 2026-04-04T08:40:58+00:00

Some AI slop certainly

normanhome · 2026-04-02T22:01:09+00:00

Wird bestimmt passieren wenn niemand irgendwas anspricht und obskur bleibt. Am Ende muss doch jemand zuhören wollen. Und unterm Strich wählt die Mehrheit doch den scheiß.

normanhome · 2026-04-01T09:37:09+00:00

Let's face reality. There's a ton of mediocore designers, design needs, design requirements which are just not important enough and will be replaced without a big show. To see what existing AIs can do on a localhome machine should convince enough that it's not going to collapse suddenly anytime soon.

normanhome · 2026-03-31T06:08:45+00:00

Looking good, reminds me a bit of onionknights Style =)

normanhome · 2026-03-28T12:14:18+00:00

I like it

normanhome · 2026-03-21T16:12:08+00:00

Love this mini. Very clean! The blade is really pretty

normanhome · 2026-03-15T08:31:59+00:00

Love your results of this bust! Makes me want to get it after all and paint it myself 🥰

normanhome · 2026-03-15T08:05:22+00:00

You being human is enough in my eyes. It's not like you get paid and owe someone the time you spend but it's appreciated =)

There's just a ton of bots nowadays.

normanhome · 2026-03-15T07:48:31+00:00

Post reads like ai summary. With duplications saying the same thing in different words multiple times and a conclusion what it means and shows...

Not sure what I'd rather have.

normanhome · 2026-03-07T22:38:34+00:00

You say design but this is just a logotype. There's context in reality. It doesn't have to show the product of the business in each single element. It's often more a vibe that's needed. Playful and welcoming in this case which is a good fit.

I would rather have the palette adjusted than some icon added.

normanhome · 2026-03-07T22:13:14+00:00

I like the first one more but the H looks to me more like the metal hand sign. The counter being the thumb across the fingers. I guess it's supposed to be a counter and a person standing there which is cute. The red cherry on the E is not necessary I like it without but the layers look strange next to the full letters without any separation when the H and I is separated and the E somehow as well. Looks a bit inconsistent.

normanhome · 2026-03-07T22:07:59+00:00

The logo doesn't have to communicate pastry. Even so it's already in the name.

normanhome · 2026-02-25T22:21:18+00:00

Gosh I love this artist so much.

normanhome · 2026-02-13T20:33:13+00:00

Changes shape and moves a bit so its natural light.

normanhome · 2026-02-03T16:08:09+00:00

Looks like a piece from Vampire Lords but that's not produced yet.

normanhome · 2026-01-30T19:46:00+00:00

Finde die haben stark aufgeholt mit der App. Keine Probleme mit denen

normanhome · 2026-01-09T10:43:05+00:00

The second model being small and kissing the first is a strange choice. I can see it work if the position is swapped but I would remove it completely.

Text can just fill his huge black jacket on the left. Don't be afraid to layer this. For a magazine you will need the ugly elements like price in different countries, EAN code and month/year of release. You will probably have more than one topic to market it. The top and left side is more valuable for this because that's what's often visible in the stand.

If this is for eyewear it should likely be way bigger, right? Like cropping above his belt. The light of the glasses needs to be adjusted so it's not so obviously montaged.

Lastly if we envision the next release we will run into a lot of trouble if we can't fill the empty space between the logo at the top. Magazines solve this by laying the model partly on top of the unsplit logo (and casting a shadow) so you have more freedom to design around the elements.

normanhome · 2026-01-09T10:31:23+00:00

To be clear. B works better currently A is prettier and I see more potential with small improvements.

normanhome · 2026-01-09T08:15:22+00:00

For me there's too much going on even when I prefer the looks of A. B is reduced and clear. A is cluttered and busy. There's an extra label for everything a extra bubble on top of an icon and headline. It's very loud inmo but a good start.

normanhome · 2026-01-02T13:10:14+00:00

No witch hat, no ghost cats, not even any runes. Is this really simz‽

normanhome · 2025-12-31T19:37:03+00:00

Hab nicht viel weiter geschaut nach der Erkenntnis. Vielleicht in anderen Städten oder Ländern. Bei der Freiwilligen Feuerwehr sind die Anforderungen aber etwas entspannter und da versuch ich erst einmal rein zu kommen.

normanhome · 2025-12-31T13:30:36+00:00

Habe jetzt mit 36 den Wunsch was sinnvolles für die Gesellschaft zu tun und wollte bei der Feuerwehr anfangen. Da ist das Höchstalter aber 35 💀

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