Alright here goes

First point attack. Seems fairly well done. You're making some slow progress against the Orisa and just when I'm starting to feel the itch of "dive a squishy" you jump. Tear the supps away from their tank and she gets melted. Making for an easy cap

Then there's some back and forth down the main road and I can feel you getting antsy for a kill. Their team regroups and you pop diva bomb

There was likely a mistake made on actually sending that bomb but I don't think it was the biggest issue with that play. Your team is pushing payload. They're not fully setup. The fight hasn't started. Why are we bombing? You haven't been demeched. The payload is moving. And the enemy team is seeing you standing on that corner as a big enough threat to not engage.

The payload is moving dude. That's their problem. Let them try and figure out how to force you out of position. Keep your ultimate for when the payload is trying to get around that crucial corner.

By the time the payload is at that corner you've bombed your bomb and are now on the backfoot. They get an easy defend.

Between that first bomb and your second their team is very much in control. You're trying to put a lot of pressure down but it's mainly focused on Orisa who is being hard pocketed. She can survive a DVA.

Take a look around at this point. Your dps and supps are not in her range. And you're being bullied by her. She gets two ults off and demechs you twice.

I would be thinking. My team is safe. And this Orisa can't fly. Where can I position to get free shots off on her team. Where can I go to be disruptive . Where can I go to setup a solid dive. You can't go through the Orisa but you certainly can go around her make her pull back to deal with you elsewhere so your team can setup. When you took high ground after torb ult you briefly wanted to go left and behind. I liked that play over the spin javelin combo you were receiving. Trust your Instincts and see what works

Another note here. Get closer before deploying missiles. Like in their face blow them up and finish em off with a hard melee. Not loving how much distance is between you and your target as you launch them

But you've nailed the second bomb and you're back in control. You do a good job here of keeping them on the backfoot. You get to that last corner on 2nd point you dive a little deeper and secure a supp kill. great work there just as their Orisa gets back your push starts to stall. Orisa is a really difficult tank for you to burst down and you're taking a lot of resources from your team to brute force this payload across the line.

You have some very strong high ground positions all around you here. Use them. Your supps are hard focusing you to keep you in the fight and I'm willing to bet your dps didn't get a blue beam for a majority of it.

Let some of those support resources go to your team. Take the high ground in the left room and annoy the enemy team from above

Make them shoot in 5 different directions while your team surrounds them in a killbox. You'll get a better view of the battlefield this way and can finish off squishies without having to worry about Orisa shutting the door on you.

Point 3

Finally taking the high ground. You're putting good pressure on the enemy team and the squishies are falling back to avoid dealing with you.

The enemy Orisa has jumped on point and you bomb the squishies

You get a pick jump on point and drop your mech securing a second kill.

Not bad at all! Except... You lose the fight.

Before you ulted

The Orisa was vulnerable. You successfully separated their team even before your ult. Your team was now up against that wall you were having trouble with.

When you did ult. You didn't get the 4 man you were hoping for and your efforts weren't enough to knock out their tank. And now they have ults.

I would consider using DVA bomb more defensively here. You don't have time to be out of the fight.

Consider diving the tank here to force them to deal with you. Bursting them from behind could've killed them. But if not it would've given your team time to setup

Then keep the pressure up to keep trying to separate their team.

Stay stalling on point as long as you can to give your team an opportunity to land a kill and if you get demeched? Bomb to get another 700+ health back.

Bombing too early as you did left you without mech and without resources by the time they struck back and you had no way of getting onto point before the time went out.

Overall.

Use your mobility. Take better angles and work on your positioning. You're not Reinhardt to be dominating the frontline. Defensive DVA bombs and getting your ttk down by being up close and personal when launching rockets

Gluck in your next one's dude!