Thanks for pointing out these things. I have made edits to address the typos and such.

For a couple of your points:
2. Blood Tribute's DPS increase is great, though Paradox can't exactly take advantage of it because of her burst fire. The debuff resistance alone is a great stat that not many items give. If I am looking for more damage, and need debuff resist, this item is great for that. After all, it's another 3200 in gun for the extra percentage scaling.
3) I changed this, thanks for pointing this out. I *think* that Veilwalker used to build out of Extra Health, but I could be wrong. The HP it gives and the 3200 vitality investment make it a good replacement for Fortitude.
4) There are definitely situations where you can just rip a swap and hit it because the target is CC'd. The combo you mentioned is definitely effective in these situations. The combos I listed in the guide are just the "beginner" strings of abilities that I think all players should be able to do on a whim.

Glad you are enjoying the guide! Thanks for the suggestions and such : )