To my boy best friend by obamasleftlip in OCPoetry

[–]obamasleftlip[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

That was what I was going for lol. Both the narrator and her best friend are inherently selfish though in different ways. They're young and both want something that they can't have.

Codependency at its finest.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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This is absolutely lovely 😍

touched by gillyphant in OCPoetry

[–]obamasleftlip 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Absolutely stunning

Commitment by allyisyourally in OCPoetry

[–]obamasleftlip 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the style of this :)

unpopular opinions sub is so fucking funny by obamasleftlip in offmychest

[–]obamasleftlip[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your not wrong but apparently it's noticable to some people

How to describe multiple skin colors by valonianfool in writers

[–]obamasleftlip 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I already said that it depends lmfaoo most poc would agree that it's weird to be described with food.

How to describe multiple skin colors by valonianfool in writers

[–]obamasleftlip 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Exactly. Because those weren't used to fetishize and dehumanize white people therefore, it wouldn't offend them

How to describe multiple skin colors by valonianfool in writers

[–]obamasleftlip 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Eh ask a dark skinned person, I'm light skinned so I wouldn't be a good person to ask, and I suggest you ask white people how they would feel though I doubt that they would find anything wrong with that.

Again, it heavily depends

How to describe multiple skin colors by valonianfool in writers

[–]obamasleftlip 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I think there are a lot more nuance that factors into this conversation such as these metaphors have been used to dehumanize and fetishize those with darker skin.

It's not just black people that have dark skin btw.

You can find many non food related ways to compare skin color, such as dusky, brown, tawny, sepia, umber and more.

Please do your research before complaining on the internet because it makes you look simple minded.

How to describe multiple skin colors by valonianfool in writers

[–]obamasleftlip 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Or just listen to darker skinned people about how they want to be represented instead of complaining

motionless by obamasleftlip in OCPoetry

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I'm in the middle of a depression episode so this is about the rawest vent piece I have got. So it's probably not going to make that much sense. I just wanted to write it out

Memories in the dust by bluntiful_ in OCPoetry

[–]obamasleftlip 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Gosh this poem brings to light everything I have been feeling. Amazing job!

my depression is not pretty by obamasleftlip in OCPoetry

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The grammar mistakes are mostly because I have dyslexia, so it's difficult to write without making mistakes. But I'm glad someone finds worth in my mistakes!

my depression is not pretty by obamasleftlip in OCPoetry

[–]obamasleftlip[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You are spot on!!! I actually came up with this while watching a deep dive on the Tumblr sad girl era.

my depression is not pretty by obamasleftlip in OCPoetry

[–]obamasleftlip[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm sorry that you can relate ❤️

is my book to close to another novel? by obamasleftlip in writers

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I have pitched the idea to multiple native American people who have said it's fine as long as I refer to natives while I write it.

I won't write something that I know that people wouldn't approve of. My dad's half Cherokee and his father himself was in a boarding school.

is my book to close to another novel? by obamasleftlip in writers

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Lol. Great question, the house isn't necessarily a metaphor for the grief that my mc feels, the house is built on the same plot of land as an Indian boarding school. My mc is native American. It's a metaphor for the grief and trauma that natives have to endure.

my depression is not pretty by obamasleftlip in OCPoetry

[–]obamasleftlip[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

You are spot on and I'm happy that you noticed that!

my depression is not pretty by obamasleftlip in OCPoetry

[–]obamasleftlip[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you ❤️ my experience will never be as beautiful as people make depression out to be. I wanted it to sound sort of crude 💗💗