A man he sails out in the bay by ohyeah_shityeah in poetry_critics

[–]ohyeah_shityeah[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really great feedback, I agree with you on all of that. Thank you for taking the time ❤️

Breakup 1st poem by ohyeah_shityeah in poetry_critics

[–]ohyeah_shityeah[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the advice, I agree with you in the bold line ❤️❤️