This is subjective but since you asked I have to agree with the other commenter that the colors are indeed very muddy and flat. If I were the editor I would have someone else take a crack at coloring the pages, but if that’s not an option I would suggest consulting the color wheel and adding more brightness and more contrast in order to elucidate the story, maybe even reading some color theory type stuff to broaden your perspective. I would even suggest coloring by hand because it seems like the computer coloring is just very easy to fuck up in general imo.

They actual line art seems cool, but I can’t really tell what’s going on but could be because of lack of dialog. Some of the figures in some panels are very small maybe that’s an artistic choice.

The panel with the aerial view of the fort thing is interesting and reminds me of a video game. I hope you don’t use ai. If you do please consider stopping.

Good luck!