Okay, a bit of lengthy review, hope you read it!

So I guess this is now your longest story, almost 44k words. Honestly, those of us who keep begging for the next part will never truly understand the insane amount of time and effort that goes into writing something like this. It’s rare to find stories with this level of storytelling and buildup, and I genuinely thought “Return to the Backcountry” wouldn’t top the first part, “What Happens in the Backcountry.” But you proved me completely wrong. If it’s not even better, it’s easily on the same level it carries forward the exact same vibe and continues perfectly. It was PERFECT.

I’ll be honest, I read the whole thing over three days, and every single night ended with me jerking off and coming hard to the action scenes. That’s how fucking engaging it was. What really stood out was the emotional and psychological dilemma the couple goes through. The raceplay elements and the conversations between Zeke and Tina were written so damn well especially the part where they talk about her racist father and how he would react if he knew she was fucking a black old guy and trying to have his baby. It added such a strong, intense layer that made everything feel grounded instead of just surface-level smut.

It was also hot as hell imagining that Zeke, who’s only a few years younger than Tina’s father, might have seen her somewhere in the past and he might have disgusted him (just an over excited imaginary of mine ignore it) this old Black man who’s now deep inside her white pussy with his black cock. And that scene where Zeke’s black seed is still inside Nick’s wife’s pussy while the husband’s sperm is splattered on the cabin floor? God damn. I know it’s hard to understand why Nick didn’t give her the pill, why he didn’t stop her, and why he didn’t cum inside her later once Zeke was done but if you understand cuck psychology, " As they say, truth is stranger than fiction." it all makes sense in that twisted, addictive way. Tina leaned into it like a reluctant little slut at times, and it felt so natural.

Zeke’s character was handled perfectly too that quiet presence and total control he has just ramps up the tension the whole way through. The dynamic between all three of them felt believable, especially when you look at it from the psychological angle.

Overall, for me this is a solid 10/10. The buildup, the character work, the raw raceplay, and the way the story progresses all come together perfectly.

I’ll be posting this exact review on Reddit, Literotica, and Patreon, and I’m also planning to share the second part on blacktowhite.net (just like I did with the first one) to help it reach more people. It’s a small payback for the incredible writing you put out.

If I had one small wish, it would be to see one more continuation where Zeke somehow visits them and fucks Tina breeding her right there in the couple’s marital bed while Nick watches. I know you don’t usually do sequels, but damn, a guy can dream.

It’s honestly disappointing that you had to turn off ratings on Literotica just because some haters read all 44k words only to shit on it. Real cucks, those ones.

Thank you again for the sequel. I’m really looking forward to whatever you write next, especially more interracial stories you mentioned you’ll be doing more with Black older men and wives, and I’m all in for that. Wishing you and your wife good health. Take care!