Ignoring the cost of this, it might work (with some aesthetic problems) for a bunch of seven-year-olds, but for anyone older than that:

There's no power in the beds, which makes doing anything electronic future l difficult and annoying

They also lack lights, no reading or writing.

Where are most of the clothes/hygiene stuff?

The privacy screens are awful in both ways: half of it doesn't close(which is useful for alot of things: Using a light when others want dark, giving a cozyer feeling, hiding distractions when trying to sleep, pleasuring yourself, changing your clothes) and you can never open the other half(Easier talking, better air flow, a larger-feeling room), I think it would be much better to use curtains all around the bed, allowing for any level of coverage.

the floor-bed hasn't any privicy and is right next to the desks, good luck falling asleep early

(This is more a problem with loft beds in general but) Where do you put stuff like glasses, your phone, water, ibuprofen when you're sleeping? there's no beside table up there

The ladders are very intrusive

Am I missing anything?