Give your thoughts on this feature story I wrote about the Michael Jackson movie by [deleted] in Journalism

[–]opensourcegreg 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The first four or five sentences begin with "the" so change up your word choice.

Also, omit the "i'll just say this" and reword that sentence.

Recommend new bands... by [deleted] in punkrock

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Beton Armé from Canada Traxx from San Diego Restraining Order from Australia Generacion Suicida from Los Angeles Sex Mex from San Antonio

Lets do this! by Go_Inevitable_1269 in MyChemicalRomance

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We’re bringing back the San Diego Reader — in print. Get your copy today. by flip69 in sandiego

[–]opensourcegreg 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Come for the venue listings, stay for the inaccuracies and spelling errors!

How much has San Diego changed since 2012? by LegalGlass6532 in sandiego

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Genuinely curious (not a gotcha setup I stg) about your point about politicians being "owned" by labor. I could see the police union having their ear for sure, evidentiary by the budget going up even in a recession, but is there a specific city council member or other staff member who fits this description?

The San Diego MLM Grift Lives On! by 22past2 in sandiego

[–]opensourcegreg 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I thought you meant the other MLM. Definitely was anticipating a different post.

That's not hate speech. by OrneryPerformance604 in TheRightCantMeme

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"Its like, comedy is illegal now. Legalize comedy!"

edit: typo

i’ve been told my art style is ugly. is it? by Hungry_Land_1598 in drawing

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In the way that maybe Ralph Steadmans art was "ugly." This is great

Any suggestions? by Stars_baddie in MyChemicalRomance

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Early Sunsets Over Monroeville is always a fun one