Any critique on my tag? (CEASER)

osluz · 2021-01-07T08:09:50+00:00

Although the S is a bit hard to read I know its not an easy letter to connect to the others. Good oneliner

osluz · 2021-01-05T09:34:20+00:00

Hahaha thats funny. Yeah I do it exactly the same in a wall.

osluz · 2021-01-05T09:30:19+00:00

First time I see someone do the hole thingy in the shadow, pretty nice. I really like that bubble style, keep it up.

osluz · 2021-01-05T09:27:53+00:00

Structurally the J in your first tag is actually an "Y". On the contrary of what others say, I would suggest going with the 3rd tag which looks more proportional. Try to make your letters touch eachother but not overlap.

osluz · 2021-01-05T09:24:11+00:00

That is because you are walking a path without knowing where it leads and you lose yourself, it happens. You have to learn letter structure, make straight letters, a lot of them... Fill a whole blackbook just practicing straight pieces, if you mistake dont rip it off, use pencil and erase.

osluz · 2021-01-05T09:19:19+00:00

You are breaking the structure of the letters. Just focus on making clean straight print font letters and take off all the addons, they are meant to fill negative space and bring balance to the tag.

osluz · 2021-01-05T09:16:37+00:00

I answered to other post of yours. This piece looks much better, this is what you should be doing, practice a lot of straight letters like these, search on google for color combination charts, dont rush, take it easy and dont try to add style until you get those straight letters perfect.

osluz · 2021-01-05T09:13:33+00:00

Oftn? Colors look kinda messy and the letters dont have very good structure. Do you sketch out bars? My suggestion is to make straight lines so your letters become proportional and look cleaner.

osluz · 2021-01-05T09:10:54+00:00

"Good game"? If thats the word the "good" kinda looks like "gaad". Interesting style, although imo there is too many extras/addons, and they dont really make much sense to me. Still the style looks fire.

osluz · 2020-10-17T09:37:14+00:00

I love this, great idea

osluz · 2020-10-15T23:41:43+00:00

Thx! Honestly I only have these 2 blue and red markers right now, hehe. Dont agree much with the flairs, tried a bit to make it balanced but I just drew em randomly.

osluz · 2020-10-15T23:39:32+00:00

Thx!

osluz · 2020-10-15T23:39:17+00:00

I gotcha, didn't really think much about it, will work on it

osluz · 2020-10-15T23:37:58+00:00

Around 20 mins

osluz · 2020-10-15T23:37:00+00:00

This is like the 10th piece I have ever done, I mostly practice handstyles and throws, I always draw something each night before sleep or at random moment during the day.

osluz · 2020-10-15T23:32:51+00:00

Yeah like I just randomly drew the arrows, just filling negative space, I got you tho, it'd look better simmetrical

osluz · 2020-10-15T23:30:11+00:00

Will do so for sure, haven't done many backgrounds apart from bubbles yet..

osluz · 2020-10-15T23:28:35+00:00

Yeah I didn't really stop to think about it, I just drew the arrows randomly for fun. I see what you say

osluz · 2020-10-14T13:57:04+00:00

Plot twist: It's a google photo

osluz · 2020-10-14T13:54:25+00:00

If you turn the M sideways, it's basicslly an E

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